Writing quality 4 some chapter have a little misspellings and other have a lot which kills the readers immersion. Stability of updates= 5 usually 1 or 2 a day which is really good compare to some novels. Story development 5 because this is new by making the brother the renacarnated not the mc is some I've only seen 3 times throughout my time in qidian and I been here since the beta and that makes this a unique story in my opinion. Character development 4 this I honest dislike the mc I know that the way he was set might be for future settings and other scripts but I seen in other novels where you hate the mc for say the first 3 chapters and every other once in a while. But this you know idk hopefully this gets fix sooner rather then later a couple of my dao friends have dropped this because of this, some said cuz mc was to stupid other told me they believe the mc is too nai.ve to the point it makes him unlikeable. I personally agree with some but wont give up on it just yet this has a lot of potential. Background story 5 has description of a lot of place they travel through giving it a solid foundation to it. 4.5/5 stars.
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LIKEI agree that the last four chapters had a lot of misspellings because I was not able to edit them properly. I'll make sure that such a thing doesn't happens again. As for the MC, he's indeed a bit *****, but he's adapt to the new situation and become better as the story progress.
Don't worry mate I usually re read them every 50 chapters and revisit my reviews and re-edit them. I also know about how much of a bi.tch auto-correct and auto fill are.ππ