Review Detail of ICE_BEAR in Sovereign of the Karmic System

Item: Sovereign of the Karmic System
Rating: 2.2

Review detail

ICE_BEARLv135yrICE_BEAR

Delete my old review. After reading more than 50ish chapters, I decided to drop this. A fair bit of inconsistencies on quality. At times the author tried to be very descriptive to have the reader have a better idea what he trying to convey, the next, he just blaze thorough without any second thought. Fair bit of typos too. Story was interesting when its building up with the oh so common cliché plot armour, but as it progresses, the idea of the "goal" of the story is lost.

Sovereign of the Karmic System

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ObscureHeartLv3ObscureHeart

I have felt the same thing too.. but I've kept an open mind after reading the multiple comments of the author that said 'this novel is on the realistic side'. It is true that a goal is important, but people have to find a goal in their lives before pursing it.

5yr

SorcererCatLv5SorcererCat

The author make some mistakes in the beginning of the LN, but these mistakes don't keep happening. The author gets a LOT better at writing his story as the story goes on. He is a new author. You have to give new authors a bit of a break.

5yr