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CruxL
CruxLLv116yr
2018-12-06 03:52

It's a nice read, till the necromancer and priestess stuff, then it turns kinda downhill, the female lead is.... waaay too unstable, waaay too childish, even though she oughta have almost thousand years, living an entire life, growing till old, and still having learned almost nothing? As if her entire past life had been a dream and she resets her persona as fast as her lives end?? I can't understand, can't relate. But even though I am saying this, I hope that the next arc the author can mature a bit, and write a more.... Understandable main character.... Maybe even in their future works.... Who knows?

Quick Transmigration: The Villain Saving System

littlemist
4.5
117 Chs

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fluffypancake
fluffypancakeLv3

Plzz update can't wait for the next update, very interesting story Plzz keep going. Love your story. Could be better if you make the mc more stronger

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Noonii
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InfinitelyYours
InfinitelyYoursLv5

Like any other Quick Transmigration series, this is a novel that sends me to heaven and hell back and forth. Different from Ning Shu, Xunmi, and Gu Shengyin, the protagonist Yin Mei changes her thoughts/morals/mentality in life (in a good and bad way) because of the challenges and traumas hitting her like a wrecking ball. Aside from the plot twists, my favorite yet worst parts are the endings that are giving me the urge to slap the sadist Author. This is resulting in either the reader dropping the novel in frustration or turning them into masochists (apparently, countless has already been transformed). Fortunately, the Author doesn't forget to give us the carrots of fluffy and snu snu scenes, (after the three stabs of the stick to our hearts, of course) making us flutter, laugh, and cry. Anyway, I highly recommend this novel to those who are masoc---er, likes transmigration plots that have different worlds to explore and characters to hate or love. Keep up the good (bad?) work, littlemist!

6yr
NeverBeenSeen
NeverBeenSeenLv12

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6yr
hawlol
hawlolLv4

Boring plot and rushed bad endings. It wasn't my cup of tea, but maybe, you'll like it!? The story is a little too rushed. The beggining is very fun, but it seems like the author got tired of it and killed the antagonists like they were random cannon fodders, and solved most of the MC problems without any excitement. Then she did the same with the entire arc, simply giving it a big time skip and really unfufilling resolution. (which is a spoiler) The second Phoenix Arc was even more stale with very little adventure or exciting events. Then, an even more unfufilling resolution than the first comes in the end, accompanied by several giant time skips as well. It's like the author is just masochist or writing an story for people with bad endings fetish. So, after seeing all the parts that would be fun be skipped and then watch two really rushed and bad endings, I dropped it.

6yr
lurKing_m0de
lurKing_m0deLv10

It's good to stop here now. I thought something was off with the 1st arc then comes a long the 2nd arc. At first, I didn' know why at times the story irritates me until this chapter. I don't know about the others but I find each arc paced unevenly on some parts then it felt like character development isn't flowing correctly. Some abrupt changes especially in the FL. I can't express it clearly but it just felt uncomfortable? or like something is missing? or flow of story is not right? Anyway, that's just me.

6yr
Muuushyyyy
MuuushyyyyLv4

The story is very well written. I love how the author put his/her efforts when it comes to adding the details in the story (ex. the characteristics of the characters, the world, etc.) but I wished that we had the chance to take a peek how our MC died. Overall it's worth reading, I assure you that. Keep up the good work! This is a gem.

6yr
nemtsd
nemtsdLv11

I love this story so much. And i think this is the only novel that i like to read again so much time! Highly recommend this novel! I sadly it look like the author had dropped this novel. But don't let it get you- each arc for his own. But we always want more

5yr
VixenJade
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