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Red_Tempest
Red_TempestLv46yr
2018-10-14 22:42

Wonderful novel: definitely my new top original. I love the steampunk ideas and themes. I am glad you did not drop it after the contest: keep writing pls. I like the OP MC and his goals. His abilities are srsly ridiculous. The factions in the wotld are messed up: like nearly everyone is cruel. But its the apocalypse so I guess thats ok. Mc seems to hold up ok after going through terrible situations. I do wish he would lay low for some time and build up his power. Like why does he always keep trying to join/start a faction. He could wander for a while. And maybe even stockpile weapons in a hidden warehouse with his abilities.

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SnoozySloth
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Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I get what you mean by stockpiling power. I guess it just doesn't mesh with his personality, haha.

Eli_Templeton
Eli_TempletonLv2

i agree

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