Review Detail of Scarlettbunny in White Queen Ascending

Item: White Queen Ascending
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

ScarlettbunnyLv115yrScarlettbunny

Honestly the grammar in the story is just awful. Read it out loud to yourself before you post and see the difference from your head to ears once you get the hang of it, I can see your novel just shot to the stars and moon. Despite the grammar, it is a very captivating story, makes you want more chapters now. Just please work on the grammar first!

White Queen Ascending

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existingAuthorexisting

Thank you!! I'll work hard on the grammar 😫😫 haha I didn't know it was really bad. I'll make time to ediiiiit. Thanks for the review!!

5yr

ScarlettbunnyLv11Scarlettbunny

That's awesome. Take your time and really watch what your typing. I'm adding this to my library I think it will turn into something great!

5yr

existingAuthorexisting

Thank you! I'm so happy about your impression!

Scarlettbunny:That's awesome. Take your time and really watch what your typing. I'm adding this to my library I think it will turn into something great!

5yr