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2018-09-17 12:33

I loved the concept of this novel and thought I would give it a try. Best decision I have made in a while. Great fun with lots of good story developments. I love nugget, I love his armor, and I generally love the idea of the character going through this world. The fight scenes are done well, not too much detail but not so little as to be confusing. The grammar and general English is at a high level which is refreshing. If I have any complaints it is that there isn't really enough meaningful character interaction. There are plenty of interactions between our MC and irrelevant characters but seemingly little in the way of discussions that matter or go anywhere. I would love to see a growing bond between him and nugget as well as enduring bonds with others (be they players or NPCs). That said it is very early and this sort of thing can definitely happen with time.

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