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Atryx10
Atryx10Lv136yr
2018-12-05 01:27

It's a decent story for someone to have as a first read. It's got flaws, but not enough to make me angry, just disappointed. Starts like it's going to be a ****ty Isekai, then it gets better, more interesting, then it starts to show that it wants to force romance on us down the line when it really wouldn't suit the overall tone, then the sword gets turned into a woman and the author says it's going to be in a relationship with someone that's not the mc because the love interest for the mc is most likely going to be lenya and this isn't a harem novel (thank fucking god). Could be worse, but overall, not my cup of tea.

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AhraManyu
AhraManyuAuthor

There's 'romance', not Romance. I can't write that for ****. Of course there will be that kind of ******* between characters but I will never actually develop a romance. There are couples but that's all there is to it and it's only natural. Also, I never forced romance in my novel. I don't know where you got that from. I didn't force the romance, rather, I would say that I forced a character in the story. And yes, I answer this four months later.

Atryx10
Atryx10Lv13

At the very least I get answers, thank you.

AhraManyu:There's 'romance', not Romance. I can't write that for ****. Of course there will be that kind of ******* between characters but I will never actually develop a romance. There are couples but that's all there is to it and it's only natural. Also, I never forced romance in my novel. I don't know where you got that from. I didn't force the romance, rather, I would say that I forced a character in the story. And yes, I answer this four months later.
IPreferLonerMc
IPreferLonerMcLv5

Damn, he’s just saying his opinion

AhraManyu:There's 'romance', not Romance. I can't write that for ****. Of course there will be that kind of ******* between characters but I will never actually develop a romance. There are couples but that's all there is to it and it's only natural. Also, I never forced romance in my novel. I don't know where you got that from. I didn't force the romance, rather, I would say that I forced a character in the story. And yes, I answer this four months later.
AhraManyu
AhraManyuAuthor

Oh, I was not angry or anything. That's just how I usually act. Don't mind. Yes, again, 1 month later. I'm a bit late. A really tiny BIT.

IPreferLonerMc:Damn, he’s just saying his opinion
User177785
User177785Lv12

actually, after the goddess asks the girl it never brought up until later and he straight up says I don't know if I can love you cause I don't if I'm even capable of feeling it and then they fight and she is never useless to the story at all no damsel in distress or anything if anything she was being compared to the mc because she was an abnormal freak like him and they later can fuse together to become stronger (of course that's not even a part of the mc's strength worth mentioning

Doxombre
DoxombreLv4

After all the 4 star and below rating I've read, I started to get more interested. It's great news that there's no harem, and I'll try it out for myself. I tend to see things myself first before I judge.

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