Hello... I don't know what I'm supposed to say in a review of my own novel! Why do I need to write at least 140 characters ?! Well, like I said above, this novel is something that came out from young me's head but I didn't do much at that time. Like, enough to fill 2 chapters? You see the picture. In the end I decided to pick this not even started work and continue it. I already thought of how the history will go, I already revealed a bit in the synopsis. Sooo, yeah. If this novel survive, somehow, enough to include all the different fantasies in my head then I think I'll be proud of myself. The END.

good characters, background, Main Character, and story. I like how the mc does whatever he likes, his coldness, his strength and his personality the most. simply a well written book, love it.

It was good until the academy arc, it ticks me off when he just accept everyone request like he’s their slave. Especially to the girls, he was supposed to be a veteran and smart but this whole arc prove that he’s stupid. Like, he knows that gods will be chasing for his life and what does he do? Fcking teach a strangers because apparently he was “bored”. Then after that i thought it’s gonna be good again, but no. The author decided that the mc should accept everyone request like a retard without any benefits. And the most stupid thing is that he hold back against cerberus who could destroy the world because cerberus power was reduce since he’s not in hell, so he decided that he’ll be fair and decrease his power as well so they could fight fairly, like how stupid is that? That fcking dog could kill and destroy your love ones and you fcking fight fairly? Because what? Because dog shtt! I dropped it after that because he literally turn to slave, accept everyone task without benefits, says that woman are scary when we all full know that he’s the strongest, and some stupid sht. I’m outy

It's a decent story for someone to have as a first read. It's got flaws, but not enough to make me angry, just disappointed. Starts like it's going to be a ****ty Isekai, then it gets better, more interesting, then it starts to show that it wants to force romance on us down the line when it really wouldn't suit the overall tone, then the sword gets turned into a woman and the author says it's going to be in a relationship with someone that's not the mc because the love interest for the mc is most likely going to be lenya and this isn't a harem novel (thank fucking god). Could be worse, but overall, not my cup of tea.

I don’t know why this doesn’t have more reviews. This is one of the best stories in this type of setting I have ever seen. The pace isn’t too slow or fast. The characters have an actual personality and the story is interesting. Thanks for the story!

The story isn't a terrible one but unfortunately the writing doesn't carry it across- this is due to a combination of mistakes in word choice and grammar as well as a general lack of understanding of the meanings of words. If you love reading MTL books for some reason, it should work for you but otherwise I would suggest you steer clear. If the author gets an editor and re-writes the chapters, I may re-review.

It is a very well written novel, the main character is a man with a shrouded past. I am looking forward for more chapters.

I've read this novel since the beginning of it's creation and it blows my mind on how this much world building, backstory lore, and concrete plot is only ranked sub 100 among these other garbage novels in comparison to this master piece. This is by far the best hidden gem of novels I have read since moving to Qidian. 5/5 every chapter, every arc.

3☆ for writing quality since it still has some mistake 5☆ for updating 2☆ for development 1☆ for charactor design 2☆ for world background This is a readable novel writen in japanese style which love to **** the logic then and there, a lot of plot hole happened because of that. The MC doesn't have any charactor any killer have to be except for being cold and also looks more like a fomal type of justice protector MC in other novel.