Review Detail of Noirlight in Mortal to Omnipotent

This story has been DROPPED. Just felt the need to get that out there because it doesn't say it in the title or anything. Lots of world hopping, seems to become a bit bland later on in the story, like not enough info on the worlds that are hopped to. Also losing sight of the fact that it is a Naruto Fanfic. What happened to Madara and the 'Eye of the Moon' plan? What about Naruto who is … a bit different than the original in the tv series was? Overall, I still enjoyed reading the story and hopefully others who decide to give it try will too. Special Thanks to the Writer for not deleting it and adding closure (plot) to the DROPPED story.