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You said Flicker Technique is that correct or did you mean the: Body Flicker Technique?
What Jun could have said: (notice I added family and Root - still like itachi, hint that ROOT is involved/Danzo is involved) [Foreshadowing] " I'm Jun Uchiha and I like ramen, fighting and family. I dislike weak people and those who cant protect what they love, oh and rotten ROOTs. My dream for the future is to be the greatest Uchiha."
What if that was a decoy... I feel like he should have left some soldiers behind to defend against other threats... I think he a bit dense...
Why not name it the Elemental Village? I mean his companions are from the Elemental Nation/different Villages (Mist, Leaf and so on...). I can imagine the looking at him funny for his naming sense...
It just said Gunbai, right? Not Madara's Gunbai - as in like a Legacy weapon or something. So it is just a normal Gunbai, right? Just want to be clear/sure on that.
Curse of Hatred wanted... I have no idea where this story is going...I am going to keep reading, I like that I can't predict what is going to happen. Nice job writer.
What is the tree stand for?
Question: How many Affinity are there? What are the Affinity (list)?
Why not use both pics and words?
The Sunflower is Earth. Author said so when they answered a comment.
FUN FACT: Did you know giving a watch is linked to death? It is or was believed that when the time stops that will be/mean the owners death.
He didn't pick his gender!? (Male or Female) Why is that always forgotten?
This story has been DROPPED. Just felt the need to get that out there because it doesn't say it in the title or anything. Lots of world hopping, seems to become a bit bland later on in the story, like not enough info on the worlds that are hopped to. Also losing sight of the fact that it is a Naruto Fanfic. What happened to Madara and the 'Eye of the Moon' plan? What about Naruto who is … a bit different than the original in the tv series was? Overall, I still enjoyed reading the story and hopefully others who decide to give it try will too. Special Thanks to the Writer for not deleting it and adding closure (plot) to the DROPPED story.
I like the story a lot but I am finding the changing of the MC name throughout the story to be annoying. Other review-ist on here claim that the 'author' is not the 'author' but actually a translator so I don't know what's going on with that. Some of the words stops in the middle so they are not finished an example would be: Example - Naruto made a new frie Example (of what it is supposed be be) - Naruto made a new friend.