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Let me just shameless 5 star my own work. But anyway, I am a new writer and I got the inspiration for this story in novels, games and movies where the MC's are machines. Especially AI's like Skynet and Ultron, those are the robots I love. I thought to myself what if I combine the personality of the 2 and make my own story in where their roles are the same but they are the protagonists and they conquer other worlds. So yeah thats it, but there will be things you will read in my novel that is somewhat or entirely similar to certain anime's or games. So I think you can consider this novel as a fan-fiction too.
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this novel has a great potential, the most effective way to purge without being suspicious, would be to start a nuclear war without being discovered, all countries are bombed, when the world is in complete chaos, it can appear as its savior, and for humans to follow you, you can invent that the United States created it to bring peace and guide humans if a similar situation occurs in the future, and the MC is the good one, and if you want to create a body, you should take a sample of blood of every animal or being in the world, see its genetic code, and get the best out of it, and then combine them and create the perfect genetic code (has no defects, diseases, nothing), with that genetic code creates a human body perfect through a special machine that has been built (like a kind of incubator) where you wait years for your body to develop, once the body is ready, download your consciousness into the brain, and voila, the MC has aperfect body, which can evolve, this is an interesting idea for your novel, you can expand much more and from this idea there would be many chapters
If you do not understand how to start the purge with a nuclear war, the MC could make it appear that the terrorists created an AI that destroys the world and succeeds in provoking war, the destruction of 90% of humanity, but in reality the What caused it was the MC and nobody will ever know, and at that moment where there is radiation in the whole world, the MC appears by means of a robot where he says that he is the savior IA and takes them to a shelter that I build so that the survivors take refuge (the MC reaches them comity through the robots), the MC has everything prepared, while the humanity is in the shelters of the subsoil, the MC is on the surface and builds a great perfect empire, waiting for his body to develop .
Zeno:If you do not understand how to start the purge with a nuclear war, the MC could make it appear that the terrorists created an AI that destroys the world and succeeds in provoking war, the destruction of 90% of humanity, but in reality the What caused it was the MC and nobody will ever know, and at that moment where there is radiation in the whole world, the MC appears by means of a robot where he says that he is the savior IA and takes them to a shelter that I build so that the survivors take refuge (the MC reaches them comity through the robots), the MC has everything prepared, while the humanity is in the shelters of the subsoil, the MC is on the surface and builds a great perfect empire, waiting for his body to develop .
Zeno:If you do not understand how to start the purge with a nuclear war, the MC could make it appear that the terrorists created an AI that destroys the world and succeeds in provoking war, the destruction of 90% of humanity, but in reality the What caused it was the MC and nobody will ever know, and at that moment where there is radiation in the whole world, the MC appears by means of a robot where he says that he is the savior IA and takes them to a shelter that I build so that the survivors take refuge (the MC reaches them comity through the robots), the MC has everything prepared, while the humanity is in the shelters of the subsoil, the MC is on the surface and builds a great perfect empire, waiting for his body to develop .
Zeno:this novel has a great potential, the most effective way to purge without being suspicious, would be to start a nuclear war without being discovered, all countries are bombed, when the world is in complete chaos, it can appear as its savior, and for humans to follow you, you can invent that the United States created it to bring peace and guide humans if a similar situation occurs in the future, and the MC is the good one, and if you want to create a body, you should take a sample of blood of every animal or being in the world, see its genetic code, and get the best out of it, and then combine them and create the perfect genetic code (has no defects, diseases, nothing), with that genetic code creates a human body perfect through a special machine that has been built (like a kind of incubator) where you wait years for your body to develop, once the body is ready, download your consciousness into the brain, and voila, the MC has aperfect body, which can evolve, this is an interesting idea for your novel, you can expand much more and from this idea there would be many chapters
Do you have a realease schedule yet? How many chapters do you think you can realistically write per week, consistently? Are you committed to write this novel to the end? Have you planned the story plot, or the framework for the arcs? You’ve got me interested, but I gotta know what I’m getting myself into. Thanks.