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Zeno

Zeno

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  • Zeno
    Zeno12d
    Posted

    The premise was good, but the original author didn't know how to execute it and in the end you just end up getting bored,.................................

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    One Piece: I am Imu
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  • Zeno
    Zeno14d
    Commented

    This in itself is simply stupid, it practically tells you that no one really has free will, everything is already defined, it implies that a superior being already dictated the beginning and end of that plane, boring, only someone like this author would think about this

    [Warning, Host! Your inappropriate behaviour is right on the limit of the World Essence. Heavenly Lightning might strike you any time.]
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    Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist
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  • Zeno
    Zeno14d
    Commented

    The story is entertaining, but the system is annoying, surely if there was no system there would be more readers, apart from the handling of the MC with the e tribes feels superficial, it could have been handled in a better way.

    Ch 19 Kissing Su Xian
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    Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist
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  • Zeno
    Zeno14d
    Commented

    Better say that it is the AI of his cell phone that traveled with him.

    [Master, the system is a part of your soul. My abilities can only help you realize your potential. I can't do something that is even beyond your potential.]
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    Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist
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  • Zeno
    Zeno14d
    Commented

    The explanation is too vague, there is no noticeable or real improvement, it should be more detailed

    Ch -1 Divine Cultivation
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    Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist
    Eastern · Evil_Villain
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  • Zeno
    Zeno14d
    Commented

    meh

    Ch 217 The truth (2)
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    Village Head's Debauchery
    Fantasy · Royalpanda
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  • Zeno
    Zeno15d
    Commented

    yes, too genocidal

    Ch 159 Shadow Legion moved, the Weapon Master's Might
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    Kaiju Maker in Another World
    Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds
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  • Zeno
    Zeno15d
    Commented

    You know that it is stupid to eliminate an entire sect of thousands or millions just for one person, that marks you as a genocidal psychopath, you may as well give them a curse of immediate death if they have thoughts of revenge directly or indirectly

    Unfortunately for this elder, the Seven Stars Divine Palace will cease to exist because of his action. A bloody storm is about to sweep over the Azure Cloud Continent.
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    Kaiju Maker in Another World
    Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds
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  • Zeno
    Zeno15d
    Replied to kharam

    Yes, it is almost 60, but it looks 20 except for some small wrinkles on its forehead and tufts of silver hair due to its living environment, so in reality it should look like 20, so in itself they should be long-lived species with 200 years of life expectancy maybe?

    Maybe, after this, she should just let him know that he can use her hole as a practice for Kushi before he does the real one with his chosen partner since kushi with her wouldn't count as she was old enough to birth him more than three times.
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    Village Head's Debauchery
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  • Zeno
    Zeno15d
    Commented

    The grandmother must be 60?, since if she had her daughter at 19-20, her daughter had the mc 19-29, and the mc is going to turn 19, then the grandmother should be approaching 60, the better would have been The mc's age is 16, and it feels strange that someone almost 19 years old acts like the mc, he looks like a 10-12 year old, but if the grandmother still has a good body and doesn't look as old as she is, then how much Is their life expectancy? 150, 200, 300 years? Are they half-elves or some rare lineage of a long-lived species? Also, since they have almost no wrinkles and some silver strands in their hair, this would indicate that their grandmother actually She is more beautiful, and she would only have the small wrinkle due to the life she has, the lack of better nutrition, lack of skin care, etc., and the locks of white hair would be due to the stress they live with that they have to survive, yes If they had a better quality environment to live in, they should look like they were 20 years old then, and I guess they live a long time.

    Ch 22 Grandma Celia is doing chores
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  • Zeno
    Zeno15d
    Commented

    The grandmother must be 60?, since if she had her daughter at 19-20, her daughter had the mc 19-29, and the mc is going to turn 19, then the grandmother should be approaching 60, the better would have been The mc's age is 16, and it feels strange that someone almost 19 years old acts like the mc, he looks like a 10-12 year old, but if the grandmother still has a good body and doesn't look as old as she is, then how much Is their life expectancy? 150, 200, 300 years? Are they half-elves or some rare lineage of a long-lived species? Also, since they have almost no wrinkles and some silver strands in their hair, this would indicate that their grandmother actually She is more beautiful, and she would only have the small wrinkle due to the life she has, the lack of better nutrition, lack of skin care, etc., and the locks of white hair would be due to the stress they live with that they have to survive, yes If they had a better quality environment to live in, they should look like they were 20 years old then, and I guess they live a long time.

    Ch 23 Grandma Celia's story
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    Village Head's Debauchery
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  • Zeno
    Zeno15d
    Commented

    You can't skip the first trio, you should do it and add it as an auxiliary chapter

    Ch 117 Great Way of the Buddha
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    Kaiju Maker in Another World
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  • Zeno
    Zeno15d
    Commented

    A paragraph is missing where it is added that a hurricane of deep energy appears, with yuanba being the center, looking like a black hole that draws energy to reach the tyrant kingdom.

    Tyrant Profound Realm!
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    Kaiju Maker in Another World
    Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds
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  • Zeno
    Zeno15d
    Commented

    Average size, although the MC should be able to make it longer and wider than an arm if he wanted, would his rod be moldable like a slime?

    Cang Yue licked the tip of Yu Long's dick and slowly adjusted herself to envelop the whole thing. She took six inches successfully, bringing her head down gradually.
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  • Zeno
    Zeno16d
    Commented

    Did the previous paragraphs not mention that they were tyrants?

    His grandfather's cultivation base is the 9th Level of the Emperor Profound Realm. On the other hand, his grandmother is weaker, standing at the 2nd Level of the Emperor Profound Realm.
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    Kaiju Maker in Another World
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  • Zeno
    Zeno16d
    Commented

    woman?

    Shogre is the executioner in the Blue County North. Many legends about a massive wolf creating thunderclouds and killing anyone with ill intentions appeared 'once in a while' because of her.
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    Kaiju Maker in Another World
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  • Zeno
    Zeno16d
    Commented

    The speed at the mortal peak shouldn't matter much, since they can teleport, cut space, etc, right?

    "Yuyan, show me how fast you are."
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    Kaiju Maker in Another World
    Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds
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  • Zeno
    Zeno16d
    Commented

    1 continent for a single feather

    Meanwhile, Lily rubbed the feather and mumbled, "I wonder how much this would be worth in the market..." 
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    Kaiju Maker in Another World
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  • Zeno
    Zeno16d
    Commented

    wahooo, creation planet!1

    "Since this planet was 'actually' made by the Evil God, there must be hidden minerals untouched below the ground." 
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    Kaiju Maker in Another World
    Anime & Comics · Nine_Clouds
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  • Zeno
    Zeno16d
    Commented

    edit yu kong-yu long

    "Right away~!" The Phoenix released a small yet excited cry, summoning twenty-two drops of blood from thin air. The scarlet blood contained such a strong vitality and a dense divine aura, making Yu Kong frown slightly.
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