Review Detail of David_Drake in Reaper (Being Re-written)

You must have been a real mature savant at 16 damn bro that's sick.

Sarcasm isn't your strong point. Accept the criticism for what it is.

Damn I was actually about to delete comment this after I clicked your profile. I realized you really don't have any good opinions... on like any novel. But oh well lol.

And you are bias on leaving all those xp 5 star reviews. At least I'm honest with my self

I checked to he rly does not have any hahaha

sorry not sorry :(

I'd rather see honest reviews than the mindless 5 star spam you see on so many fics. And his review isn't wrong here either. The fic had a lot of potential, but I don't see it living up to it really. That said it's still better than 70% of the other fics I've seen on the site.

I didn't even read any of this but I upvoted your review out of principle since bad review deleter are just pathetic

Thanks for the support. My comments are usually showing some of my salt for people who do things like that.

I agree. I felt the same when I read it. I don't get why the 'author' is angry at you. He didn't even wrote the novel. This is a translation.

Wow you serious?

Ya

Is this really a translation, I looked and couldn't find anything at all suggesting that?

Thank you for saving my brain from reading such a disappointing book.

He is right so wasted potential to do side kick....

Really you just made me feel like rewriting this fanfic Hey could you check out my fanfic I just posted 2 chapters and Id like a few reviews To see if theres a direction I can take in the stroy And your cRitisism is Seems better than some people giving me five star review I gave myself some critique I want critica to yell at me whats wrong with my atory so I can think of things to make my story more fun for thenfew pwople who checked it out

Aren't the stories with the ORIGINAL tag on their pic supposed to be written by those who upload it?

No. You're able to translate someone's work if you have permission. However, people play around with this terminology by pirating people's works for some cheap go fund me cash. Also, this should be a fanfic considering the 'author' is using the HP universe to write his story.

phaha what an idiot

I understand the premise and honestly I haven’t read enough of the story to pass judgment but for the stuff I have seen I’ve liked wel apart from a few things but thats due yo personal reasons like I love how he was a dememtor but when you made him human It just put me off. 😂