Review Detail of wpiencenaves in One Man Guild

Hmm, story goes random every time some s**t happens. There not even an explanation where his powers came from. Just some random, "make the MC so OP without explaining". At first, I was thinking that maybe, this will be like Overgeared. But the story telling is all over the place. I'm hoping it will improve, though. Since author is saying that he's changing/updating the story. That's why he hasn't update for so long.