Review Detail of Syr456 in One Man Guild

Not bad, not bad at all so far. Unlike some stories here, it's readable. At first, the exposition at the beginning bothered me, but as I finish the chapters, I realized that it was indeed needed. I don't think the cursing needs to be censored to be honest. It feels like that's taking away the authenticity of the story in which the author's tell; however, censorship is a judgment call on his part. I can see why it's called One Man Guild. We've got an OP player. I added it to library to further read. There were a few mirror grammar issues, but nothing that took stabbed me in the gut. The Keyboard can be a mean mistress.