Review Detail of Suns_Incarnate in Legacy: Lord Alba

- Good Character Design - Great writing qualities (thanks to the edits) - Somewhat stable updates (+ 1) - Story development is extremely slow at the start. he remains two for like 30 chapters - Usually babies would say "mama" or "papa" when their half a year old but for some reason he hadn't said one word for 2 years. i would've straight up thought my son was dumb af. But maybe it's just this worlds logic.. - Up till where i've read I couldn't help but notice you keep bringing up his sisters and how he plays with them and all but we don't even know what their names are, what they look like or how they interact. The mc may as well not have a sister. There is no emotional attachment between the readers and his so called sisters. Overall rating 2.8/5.0