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This story has a strong intro and a really interesting set up. This is beautifully destroyed by the author in the following chapters when the 3000 year old man who cultivated for 2000 of those years reverts back to being and acting like a child. Author why would you write a character with a background like that and give them no wisdom. The main is 3000 years old mentally and acts like 10-15 year old who reincarnated. The characters also don't act or react realistically at all. Grammar and prose is generally difficult to read and clunky. Its ok to read only if you like extremely ******* cultivation novels. Dropped and better luck next time author.

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Legacy: Lord Alba

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