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joostieh
joostiehLv135yrjoostieh

well i can say i have read worse. but there aren't many that are worst. about the mc in the first few chapters he is more or less afraid of woman. because of almost R*ape in his first life. the next chapters after this rape becomes a main theme. later when he decide he want to do somthing about it, the system forces him for *** with a rando woman. currently chapter 56 he wants a harem because he was a neet anime manga lover. the story arcs are short. half of the chapters are almost filled with the system look. at chapter 56 i'm wondering why there are so many that want more chapters. but not me so i'm dropping this

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Lcator1
Lcator1Lv6Lcator1

Trueee, harem sucks

AraAra
AraAraLv11AraAra

I think the Harem or not is in the opinion of each. Also I like Harem novels, why? because there will be many problem explanations like these three novels: https://***.webnovel.com/book/8177178805005705/My-Cold-and-Elegant-CEO-Wife https://***.webnovel.com/book/11287821205324705/So-Pure%2C-So-Flirtatious https://***.webnovel.com/book/8111496706003405/Red-Envelope-Group-of-the-Three-Realms So please don't insult me okay, because here the author must think about how to make the plot run well too in order to add atmosphere to the plot intended for the Genre-Harem

joostieh
joostiehLv13joostieh

the harem genre is a genre i dont like. but there are exeptions. my main problem is not there is a harem. but the harem is sudden, again this is not a real problem. and i do acknowledge that a harem can be a great story plotline. but the author wrote that he was afraid of women. to go so soon from afraid to want to collect womnen in a few chapters makes it bad for me. my intent was never to insult you or anybody. and writing a light novel, webnovel, novel or book is hard. i have idea's for light novels. but i cant work them out. writing is hardwork. then comes rando's dude's and dudets to complain about your precious work. who gave them the idea to complain about your precious work. but i think my review is not without reason. i sincerely hope that the author write many chapters to spread the joy of reading . but it has failed to reach me. author do keep writing,

OmnipotentApeGod
OmnipotentApeGodLv11OmnipotentApeGod

I don't know about the other guy but I don't like harems in cultivation books they suck. they're not intricate there's no problems it's just there to be there. I wish there was intricate problems and more realism in cultivation harems but there's not so I hate them. If you know any cultivation book with these included please tell me that.

AraAra:I think the Harem or not is in the opinion of each. Also I like Harem novels, why? because there will be many problem explanations like these three novels: https://***.webnovel.com/book/8177178805005705/My-Cold-and-Elegant-CEO-Wife https://***.webnovel.com/book/11287821205324705/So-Pure%2C-So-Flirtatious https://***.webnovel.com/book/8111496706003405/Red-Envelope-Group-of-the-Three-Realms So please don't insult me okay, because here the author must think about how to make the plot run well too in order to add atmosphere to the plot intended for the Genre-Harem
AraAra
AraAraLv11AraAra

This https://***.novelspread.com/novel/returning-from-the-immortal-world This novel if you know that means you already understand that, but if I don't, I will tell you, this novel I really like, why? The plot runs with lots of twists and turns to make the reader confused about how the next trip will be, because you know the MC here is relaxed but arrogant when you are lazy talking to fools.

OmnipotentApeGod:I don't know about the other guy but I don't like harems in cultivation books they suck. they're not intricate there's no problems it's just there to be there. I wish there was intricate problems and more realism in cultivation harems but there's not so I hate them. If you know any cultivation book with these included please tell me that.
OmnipotentApeGod
OmnipotentApeGodLv11OmnipotentApeGod

Thanks i will try it

AraAra:This https://***.novelspread.com/novel/returning-from-the-immortal-world This novel if you know that means you already understand that, but if I don't, I will tell you, this novel I really like, why? The plot runs with lots of twists and turns to make the reader confused about how the next trip will be, because you know the MC here is relaxed but arrogant when you are lazy talking to fools.
AraAra
AraAraLv11AraAra

Ok

OmnipotentApeGod:Thanks i will try it
Man_of_culture_
Man_of_culture_Lv4Man_of_culture_

'I Shall Seal The Heavens' had a harem element, to a lesser degree (it wasn't the focus of the story), and the protagonist ended up with the two most developed members of said harem: the only two that mattered.

OmnipotentApeGod:I don't know about the other guy but I don't like harems in cultivation books they suck. they're not intricate there's no problems it's just there to be there. I wish there was intricate problems and more realism in cultivation harems but there's not so I hate them. If you know any cultivation book with these included please tell me that.
KingTesla
KingTeslaLv10KingTesla

Hey bro, try the pleasure lord, is great.

OmnipotentApeGod:I don't know about the other guy but I don't like harems in cultivation books they suck. they're not intricate there's no problems it's just there to be there. I wish there was intricate problems and more realism in cultivation harems but there's not so I hate them. If you know any cultivation book with these included please tell me that.