I give the low rating isnt because the story is bad but rather cause i annoyed with the characters built. For example when jack jealous with noah gift, hello how old are you jack? You just a reborn/reincarnate basically you older than your look!! So why did you still easily jealous with noah? You're the leader of your team and you're life in there isnt hard as noah!! Duh, im really upset with the characters development in this story. But i still wanna read it till the end cause the background stroy is the genre i loved most. ;)
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I do appreciate your concerns about Jack's way of thinking, he tends to be jealous of strength, background, money, and all things good. He wants everything around him to be good. It's also because this is a combination of completely satire characters combined with gap moe :D. Actually, those scenes were meant to make people laugh cuz this novel is full of comedy :D Jack will tend to go nice to bad to ruthless and learn from his mistakes. Noah, on the other hand, will follow him blindly but there is a twist but its a secret for now. Here is Jack's person in the middle chapters; "As a person destined to be the greatest I will kill and rule everything. My enemy's despair is my attraction. I will keep them alive as long as I see their burning desire for hope. I will torture those who instantly collapse as their scream of pain invigorates me. I want to see their grief! and I want to see them bleed. I will torture the ones that back-stab me till the end of time. Those who follow me will walk on silver floors eating with golden spoons. I will protect them from pain and consider them as my family, I will see my friends rise, I will have the honor of the living and the hate of the dead, I will conquer all. I will create my own paradise, to see myself surrounded by greatness, the tip of the iceberg shinning like a crown. the greatest sociopath walking through golden carpets stained by the blood of my enemies. I will declare myself the ruler of unending desire, the representation of the greatest thought of humans, THIS IS MY LEGACY!. Fear me for I am Jack the King!...."
Well @KINZCI thanks for the explanation than. I know you mean well when you trying to portray jack character development in your story and after all your story still new. I just have different out look with jack attitud. i liked noah and feel sorry for him -he recently came to the new world than lost his twin brother and all others tribulation you gave him- jack know something about noah predicament, yet he still can jealous about it. At least now i know that it just a phase and that jack character will be better. Sorry for the error, English isn't my first language. ;)
KINZCI:I do appreciate your concerns about Jack's way of thinking, he tends to be jealous of strength, background, money, and all things good. He wants everything around him to be good. It's also because this is a combination of completely satire characters combined with gap moe :D. Actually, those scenes were meant to make people laugh cuz this novel is full of comedy :D Jack will tend to go nice to bad to ruthless and learn from his mistakes. Noah, on the other hand, will follow him blindly but there is a twist but its a secret for now. Here is Jack's person in the middle chapters; "As a person destined to be the greatest I will kill and rule everything. My enemy's despair is my attraction. I will keep them alive as long as I see their burning desire for hope. I will torture those who instantly collapse as their scream of pain invigorates me. I want to see their grief! and I want to see them bleed. I will torture the ones that back-stab me till the end of time. Those who follow me will walk on silver floors eating with golden spoons. I will protect them from pain and consider them as my family, I will see my friends rise, I will have the honor of the living and the hate of the dead, I will conquer all. I will create my own paradise, to see myself surrounded by greatness, the tip of the iceberg shinning like a crown. the greatest sociopath walking through golden carpets stained by the blood of my enemies. I will declare myself the ruler of unending desire, the representation of the greatest thought of humans, THIS IS MY LEGACY!. Fear me for I am Jack the King!...."
there will be more twist and turns in each character specially his team mates :D but i wont tell them for now :D watch out for the intimate scenes especially chapter 18 to 20 because there will be an OVA something like that somewhere till 20 that i especially made for those who likes yaoi....
eNerv_Grief:Well @KINZCI thanks for the explanation than. I know you mean well when you trying to portray jack character development in your story and after all your story still new. I just have different out look with jack attitud. i liked noah and feel sorry for him -he recently came to the new world than lost his twin brother and all others tribulation you gave him- jack know something about noah predicament, yet he still can jealous about it. At least now i know that it just a phase and that jack character will be better. Sorry for the error, English isn't my first language. ;)
