The only reason I am rating this low is my lack of knowledge of the stability of updates. The writing quality it superb The story development is excellent. We haven’t truly gotten to know the personalities of the character, but we are getting a great outline for how long many chapters there are. Lastly, there isn’t a need for a large world background. But even so, there is some and it’s quite good and appreciated.
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well thanks for the rating :D actually 1 chapter a day is already tough for beginner writers like me, I also want to make every chapter as interesting as possible. Its also my exam day today so i promise that in this 1 week vacation i will pull myself to create as much chapters as i can :). thank you very much and a rating of 4 is already high enough for me who is still starting :D
I do not know what you are talking about that the character's personalities are not that yet known, i have read the novel a while ago and knows that jack personality is a very funny person but he keeps it in his head trying to not loose his coolness. Noel is proud and agressive, Noah is a very dependent person who relies on his brother but he still is full of will power. Dimo is a childish all knowing god maybe. the old muto something is very funny who loves to act evil like a cunning child which does not really go on with him being a great elder and a 140 year old mage. Aiko was not yet properly introduce and i am hoping to see more. His father albert is strict as described but still a loving father. forgive me for not checking my grammar and all cuz you have the same issue. Arch and Suzaku's personality was recently introduced arch being an emotional type of guy while Suzaku was a bit cold. Suzaku is a ***** i can see... he just went on to make more equipment instead of saying any proper goodbye to jack and Noah. oh yeah the justification for the stability of the update is that a writer usually publish 2-3 chapters a week with 2000-3000 words. and just because you see that the word count is 1000-1000+ you want the writer to publish like the translators.. i do also see that it is really slow, but because i am really eager to read the next chapter. because in every few chapter i knew there is something fun. If only i could time travel when the novel is finish. lets pray it would not be dropped. the large world background is something to wait for. even though its already in the 8th chapter. You should know that Jack is an 7 or i do not know his age but still. How can you expect the child to see the world so fast. maybe it should be something that we should look out for. its best to write a review that relates to the things you said after chapter 20 where you have understood the whole plot. that's all for me. I saw the authors reply and i really see that he really care for your opinion. Good to know that you also liked it.
