Review Detail of Joneleth in System Programmer

The story is good but for some reason, you decided to shift it from the awesome and well-done magic/sword/transmigration/system novel into some weird half-assed mystery novel. If you continue to write this nonsense instead of getting back to basics then your novel will suffer. Your readers came here for a system novel about transmigration with a programming subplot. Stop trying to project your own interests onto them, it won't work. I should've noticed it before but your picture is some weird spy **** with a fedora, it wouldn't surprise me if you're similar to this programmer character where you like to come up with random shticks and your entire story is some kind of fulfillment fantasy. If this is, in fact, the case, then you need to nip this in the bud immediately. Self-fulfillment fantasy novels are exactly that, SELF-fulfillment. It's for you and no one else, which is why they are not entertaining to read. You need to go back to around chapter 17 or 18, and delete this entire mystery/1960's mob/detective Conan theme you're trying to emulate and stick to the bare bone basics. Train in the castle for a week, then start the cave exploration. There's no "investigation", there's no "mystery" there's no "robbery". Explore the cave via the fancy sonar system that you've come up with. Make Joshua invent some kind of program that 3D maps the cave via sound. Find relics from Joshua's world, get ambushed by the summoners, the crows, the "creatures" inside the cave, whatever, then bring whatever you decide to make them find to the surface, have Joshua explain some of his world to them, maybe demonstrate some technology, THEN you can expound on the mystery, THEN you can go "Detective Conan". What you've done right now is forced. It ruins the flow of the story and it catches your readers off guard. There is a clear shift in the quality of writing between meeting the king and the next chapter after that. You can clearly feel that the story is rushed, which is countered by the fact that you mentioned your novel "slowing down". Maybe you became impatient in your writing, I'm not sure, but you need to fix it and take it step by step. It'd help if you made an outline of your stories plot. Bare bones, brick by brick. The good part about stories is that they're easy to progress as long as you follow the proper tempo. One action leads into another, into another, into everything. As of right now, the flow of your story is completely ruined, you might also want to remove that whole "dream plane" nonsense you added in. You can't just throw nonsense into your story because you feel like it, your story is a world, in every sense of the word, randomly throwing plot devices in for no other purpose than to further the plot is a big fat no-no. You can expound on this fact with very basic questions: If this "dream plane" is a thing, why is no one else worried about it? This character uses it to "investigate" but why is that allowed? Can anyone go anywhere as long as it's in the dream world? Can the kings' dreams be manipulated? Why hasn't such a big "plotline" been previously mentioned before in the story? Because you added it in on convenience. You can't do this, it sets a bad precedent and will seed bad habits.

Pretty much what you said. And +10 to the whole "dreamworld = no limits unless said so" thing, because it sounds riddiculous.

Hey there author, may i inquire what the release rate is for this novel?

I have a very unstable schedule (I work full-time). I usually post 4-5 chapters a week. I'm trying to post at least a chapter every 2 days.

Hey author! Is this a romance or harem?

No harem. There is a duo of protagonist, one guy and one woman. While they are currently not a couple, they're becoming pretty close.

Thank you so much for the enjoyable story

Thanks for writing this. Thank you very much.