On the one hand, great chapter. On the other, I hate how you build the world by using people other than Izroth. Feels like a filler even though it's clearly not.

Gee I wonder... Who should be the one getting that Ironman (Ironant) armour... :D

Can you PLEASE stop ending the chapters with "It was none other than...!"? It gets boring, repetitive and obvious. Everyone who reads the story knows who are you talking about, so why bother?

I have to admit, cliffhangers are getting boring...

Really? Teasing us like that instead of just writing it all? So later we Izroth will turn everything upside down because of the mystical Avatar we forgot exists (cause it was not explained...)? Cheap trick.