Review Detail of Roktah in Dragon Ball, A True Coherent Fan-Fic

the author claims to write a proper non bs fanfic of dragonball, which the author can't uphold. there is a lof of bs in the first few chapters already. so his parents lost their tails, which led to him being born without a tail???? ok, so if my parents each lost a leg i would then be born with only one leg? apparently its some kind of mutation there are no further explanations. also no zenkai bc too op. so what we have is a sayin with no tail and no zenkai, so basically a human, but he is a sayin. mcs system is only giving and organizing information he gains access to. mc has access to the internet of real earth. now i dont know what significance the internet will have considering that dbz earth and universe is more advanced then real earth but ok. he kidnapped goku and travelled with him to earth even though goku would have benn send to earth anyway. his hobby during his 1 year flight to flight is engineering. its a ****show in the making. the system at this point seems pointless and for entertainment only but i guess he can learn martial arts off of it once he gets the idea. to end on a good note the only thing i agree with is that the power lvls of dbz are too ridiculous. so restricting them to a reasonable degree is a good choice for dbz fan fics.