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Review Detail of LiaFeil in ARCHER reincarnates as a NEET in a parallel universe..............what could go wrong?

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LiaFeil
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First of all, I want to apologize to Author-san. I know writing a story is difficult. But I just feel disappointed. I was expecting the Emiya Archer character from the Fate series here, but what did I get? A complete bullsh*t! Let me explain what I mean. First, the plot of the story that reminds me of a certain novel (about NEET or whatever it is) Second, Emiya cried because he was given a new life (or more or less remembering something from his past life)? This is just bullsh*t ... I mean, I know it's normal if it happens to someone else. But this is the EMIYA we are talking about! someone who has seen hell and lived through it! I've never seen Shirou cry before, !not to mention EMIYA! Third, Emiya saved someone? Ha. Ha. You might be able to ignore this, and honestly, I don't care either but ... considering the regrets that Archer has, I doubt he will save anyone else. Finally and most importantly, Author makes Emiya's character look naive and stupid. How should I say it ... Hmm ... just imagine you saw another reincarnation novel where the MC found something new and said 'Oh, yeah, something good finally appeared.' etc. Honestly, that doesn't really match Emiya's personality. * Sigh * Well, this is just my opinion, please don't blame me.

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ARCHER reincarnates as a NEET in a parallel universe..............what could go wrong?

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Zerak
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Ya I am also not sure about this story. I can’t say that it’s bad where I am at, which is the chapter he cites or the one after. But if I had to put what I feel about this fanfic into 1 word it would be “meh”