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paramyis
paramyisAuthor6yr
2018-08-12 22:04

Hello readers! Yes, that's right, it's the author here writing in my own review box... Just want to point out, I am not an experienced writer. What I write will most likely have a few mistakes regarding spelling and punctuation. Therefore, Although, I'm not aiming for anything too professional I am willing to improve. I'm open to critique...just not too harsh my fellow people I do have feelings as well (ノ﹏ヽ) Thank you all so much for reading my story and hope you enjoy! P.S. I am unfamiliar with the history of ancient China. However, I've done some research beforehand in order to represent to you proper information and understanding! If I am to make any mistakes along the way on the information, please inform me! I want accurate information. I don't offend anyone and wish to bring out the best in my settings.

RIN

paramyis
4.7
270 Chs

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MoonlessLotusLake
MoonlessLotusLakeLv6

Gender Bender! Gender Bender! Hello author, wanted to know if the release was stable. If it, I will read it after I stock pile at least 40/60 chapters~

6yr
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paramyis
paramyisAuthor

Hello there! And yes, the release is indeed stable, I will not be abandoning this story anytime soon! The latest I'll ever possibly update is a wait of possibly 2-3 days. However, that shall only happen if I'm busy as I also post other stories on here that I update daily! Also, thank you so much for reading my story!

MoonlessLotusLake:Gender Bender! Gender Bender! Hello author, wanted to know if the release was stable. If it, I will read it after I stock pile at least 40/60 chapters~
6yr
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MoonlessLotusLake
MoonlessLotusLakeLv6

Waaa... I put the other gender Bender that I found in the library! I didn't know that was your another story! Looking forward to the first to reach 40/60 chap!

paramyis:Hello there! And yes, the release is indeed stable, I will not be abandoning this story anytime soon! The latest I'll ever possibly update is a wait of possibly 2-3 days. However, that shall only happen if I'm busy as I also post other stories on here that I update daily! Also, thank you so much for reading my story!
6yr
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fluffybootydesu
fluffybootydesuLv5

What's the other gender bender story?? I love gender benders!!

6yr
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paramyis
paramyisAuthor

My other story is titled: MIMI hope you enjoy!

fluffybootydesu:What's the other gender bender story?? I love gender benders!!
6yr
Kuro_Usagi_
Kuro_Usagi_Lv10

Hey author-nim !!! Don't worry !! Your story is great !! Keep going !! Oh yeah, how often is the update ??

6yr
paramyis
paramyisAuthor

I recently caught a slight cold so updates were a delayed for just a bit! I deeply apologize, however, I just finished two chapters and an currently editing and checking over them!

Kuro_Usagi_:Hey author-nim !!! Don't worry !! Your story is great !! Keep going !! Oh yeah, how often is the update ??
6yr
Kuro_Usagi_
Kuro_Usagi_Lv10

No no, what I mean is, how many chapter a week and how many chapter a day. Anyway get well soon author !!

paramyis:I recently caught a slight cold so updates were a delayed for just a bit! I deeply apologize, however, I just finished two chapters and an currently editing and checking over them!
6yr
huntress48
huntress48Lv3

I love Mimi hope it gets more chapters

6yr
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03236340346Lv1

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MoonlessLotusLake:Waaa... I put the other gender Bender that I found in the library! I didn't know that was your another story! Looking forward to the first to reach 40/60 chap!
6yr
Zinni
ZinniLv5

keep up the goood work author ..i really like ur work

6yr
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XiaoHime
XiaoHimeLv4

I really like both of ur books....please keep surprising us with your stories :-)

6yr
ice261995
ice261995Lv4

Hello author I already like your story I will tell my friends to read this..I hope that it will continue to update

6yr
czeanczean
czeanczeanLv2

hi, i wonder how many chapters does this novel have?thanks

6yr
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Auras
AurasLv10

Great cover pic

6yr
ForestofSeas
ForestofSeasLv14

a question: why did you give Rin and her current fiance japanese names for a setting that's based on China?

6yr
Spektor
SpektorLv5

Btw its not getting revenge for someone if u r planning to kill them (in synopsis)

6yr
Ronee
RoneeLv12

Author why is the story getting updated so slow? It feels like I have waited for 2-3 weeks and only 2 chapters are updated in this time period.

6yr
paramyis
paramyisAuthor

I had a few personal things to deal with for the time being (have to catch up with school). I also write a second story daily so I try my best to write one chapter for both stories everyday. However, I’m back on track and will be updating more often!

Ronee:Author why is the story getting updated so slow? It feels like I have waited for 2-3 weeks and only 2 chapters are updated in this time period.
6yr
Ronee
RoneeLv12

Oh. Okay. Sorry, didn't know about that. It's just that I like the story so much that I was missing it. No issues. Take your time. It's great to know you are writing another story too. I will surely support you for that too. ☺️☺️☺️☺️ Keep up the good work. 👍👍

paramyis:I had a few personal things to deal with for the time being (have to catch up with school). I also write a second story daily so I try my best to write one chapter for both stories everyday. However, I’m back on track and will be updating more often!
6yr
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maomao102
maomao102Lv2

This is probably one of the top best original stories I've read on here thus far. The way the author writes is very descriptive and creates a visual in the reader's mind. It's nothing like your typical lighthearted historical novel. It has a dark edgy side to it as well as a warmth. The character portrays realistic traits, love, hatred, weakness, strength, and her vulnerable side. She's a stoic character but will crack when those she cares for are involved. I will say however, there are a few grammatical mistakes, but overall they're easy to read. This story really brings in emotions in the writing. It's also slow-paced but in a good way. Developing a proper connection with the characters relationships and giving you a view of her journey. It's dark at most times but also has many humorous scenes. I would give this story a read if you're interested in a strong and vulnerable character. Please keep writing author!

6yr

AnneChan
AnneChanLv4

Whoa, this is very promising! The way you write is also really good. It just sucks the readers in! Ah but too bad I found this too early. The wait for updates is gonna be a pain but I think your story is worth it. Keep it up!

6yr
Acetheway
AcethewayLv4

The story is so nice. But it would be better if there are more updates. This story just leaves you wanting to read more of it. The character is alsi very well described

6yr
arisla
arislaLv12

...I only need to read the summary to know that it's pretty much a copy of Song of the Long March. - Uncle killed her family to become Emperor, check. - She hides as a boy under the protection of a former general, check. - She becomes a valued strategist, check. - She falls in love with the general of an enemy country, check. I wish people who claim to write original novels actually used original plots instead of taking from others.

6yr
winimar
winimarLv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr
JARP
JARPLv5

I really like how Rin is going it's really cool. Thank you author cause I really like female protagonist as lead in stories. I really like the Rin character. Hope to see more of it.😊

5yr
J_Enyl
J_EnylLv6

One of the most promising original novels published in Qidian. Great writing! Interesting characters and plots! Talented author! What do you wish for? If you want romance then this novel has it... Historical drama? A kickass female lead? I strongly recommend you to read this novel! You'll finish it in one sitting. Such grearlt authorb KUDOS!! 🙌👏👏

6yr
Rangirl
RangirlLv4

This may 2nd or3rd time writing a review for this story this a mast read you will not regret it a mazig fl amazing story line writer is absolutely genius 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗

5yr
sathena449
sathena449Lv5

Love this story!! This is a gender bender story where the ML is strong, tough, smart, strategic, and good with martial arts. Practically no romance yet. Not sure echo the MC will be.

5yr
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