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JoseIN04
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2018-10-05 13:20

I am still angry that they removed the harem if it has been preparing it for some time and in my opinion it is a joke that you removed the harem and just sent them to HIGH SCHOOL DXD which is the perfect anime for the harem .-. rewrite it as it was at the beginning, if you **** it at the beginning, hold it and follow it

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Simply_Asura
Simply_AsuraLv5

Then, please write it urself

TheDemonNazI
TheDemonNazILv4

Preach. The only people who have the right to tell an author how to go with his story is the author itself or another author who can make suggestions

Simply_Asura:Then, please write it urself
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6

Are you high on something. You are the biggest retarded person I have ever seen . Then tell me for who does the author write his novel for . It's obviously for reader's and if reader can't tell his or her opinion then why the hell we even read it. You seriously a idiot . Just go do a mental check up.

TheDemonNazI:Preach. The only people who have the right to tell an author how to go with his story is the author itself or another author who can make suggestions
TheDemonNazI
TheDemonNazILv4

Are you mental? Do you think authors are slaves to lazy ass weebs who sit on their ass to read their books? They arent getting paid. They are writing them because they want to. Get off youe high horse you spoiled asshole. The author doesnt work for you

Shadewind:Are you high on something. You are the biggest retarded person I have ever seen . Then tell me for who does the author write his novel for . It's obviously for reader's and if reader can't tell his or her opinion then why the hell we even read it. You seriously a idiot . Just go do a mental check up.
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6

Wow dude you really are something. Men you must be a self - centered bastard. Your thinking level is twisted. If they don't want the readers opinion then why the hell they even show their work to the public.............. It's simple idiot they want us to acknowledge or know if their book is good or bad. You brainless idiot think why even made it Public if not want our opinion if the book is good or bad. If we don't do review or comments the book as good as dead. Are you 8 year old child who don't even understand such simple thing. Lol man your iq and eq are so great that I worry about your family's situation regarding you. Man I pray to God that you recover from your mental defect so that your family can rest in peace. As they had such stupid person who can't even understand such simple things.

TheDemonNazI:Are you mental? Do you think authors are slaves to lazy ass weebs who sit on their ass to read their books? They arent getting paid. They are writing them because they want to. Get off youe high horse you spoiled asshole. The author doesnt work for you
TheDemonNazI
TheDemonNazILv4

Oh? You think the authors work for you? You are so spoiled and entitled i cant believe this. Sure we can leave reviews to help them but NOT TO TELL THEM HOW THEIR BOOK SHOULD GO. Im dont talking to you. You are the worse type of person. A littlw spoiled prick who thinks everything revolves around you because you cant see real life. See ya poser. And i hope you have a beautiful day. Cause ima continue having mine and stop talking to you

Lordmaedan
LordmaedanLv2

I can't believe there are this kind of people.... I'm an author and I'm glad you say this

TheDemonNazI:Oh? You think the authors work for you? You are so spoiled and entitled i cant believe this. Sure we can leave reviews to help them but NOT TO TELL THEM HOW THEIR BOOK SHOULD GO. Im dont talking to you. You are the worse type of person. A littlw spoiled prick who thinks everything revolves around you because you cant see real life. See ya poser. And i hope you have a beautiful day. Cause ima continue having mine and stop talking to you
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