This so far is a great story with a mc who starts weak but continues to evolve to higher levels and creatures. The writing is great and I didn't notice a single grammar mistakes. As for the for the other categories it's hard to determine world background and development with so little to go by but there was no big info dump and considering my love for the premise and the writing quality I'm willing to give the book the benefit of the doubt.
AuthorWiz
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LIKEThanks for the review! :) I caught that just a little while ago, haha, that's what I get for editing the synopsis and then not checking for mistakes.
Biny:Also if the author is reading this I think there's a typo in the first line of the synopsis (wjem instead of when)
Just past dawn, the sun stands with its heavy red head in a black stanchion of trees, waiting for someone to come with his bucket for the foamy white light, and then a long day in the pasture. I too spend my days grazing, feasting on every green moment till darkness calls, and with the others I walk away into the night, swinging the little tin bell of my name.