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2018-10-13 15:17

Honestly i really love what you are doing here so keep up the goos work but i do question why you use magic as "gunpowder" but there is no mention of healing magic/fireball etc. Is it because there is no such magic like that or magic itself degraded that far that it does not exsist either way its still very questionable

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It's just the way the magic system within my novel works (after all the way magic works in any novel is dictated by its author). Although I do remember writing in the early chapters that it could be used as a sort of pseudo telekinesis or that it could be used to strengthen armour or sharpen swords. It's just that the former takes a lifetime while the latter becomes obsolete with armour piercing rounds. (There is also Sicilia and the wraiths but I'd rather not mention much about them for this moment apart from their ability to not make sounds when moving). I guess I just didn't want my magic system to be a copy paste of any typical magic setting.

imsamson
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Oh yea mb forgot about the wraith magic

Acedus:It's just the way the magic system within my novel works (after all the way magic works in any novel is dictated by its author). Although I do remember writing in the early chapters that it could be used as a sort of pseudo telekinesis or that it could be used to strengthen armour or sharpen swords. It's just that the former takes a lifetime while the latter becomes obsolete with armour piercing rounds. (There is also Sicilia and the wraiths but I'd rather not mention much about them for this moment apart from their ability to not make sounds when moving). I guess I just didn't want my magic system to be a copy paste of any typical magic setting.
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