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Victor_Fiusa
Victor_FiusaLv126yr
2018-08-27 10:37

I'm sorry, but that novel are a complete waste of time. So many potential, one fantastic system... But an useless protagonist plus some brainless characters wasted all the potential of this novel. I'm liked it on the start, but in the end I only can't continue reading this novel.

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HotOutside
HotOutsideLv5

A complete waste of time still gets 3 stars? I wonder what it takes to get 1 star from you? *honestly curious*

Victor_Fiusa
Victor_FiusaLv12

3 stars for the translation. No the novel. And as I said, it had potential, just that it is wasted.

HotOutside:A complete waste of time still gets 3 stars? I wonder what it takes to get 1 star from you? *honestly curious*
Malfini
MalfiniLv4

I love the whole origin abilities. I just hate everything to do with it being Xianxia. If this was a Japanese, Korean, or western novel, I feel it’d be a lot better.

Victor_Fiusa
Victor_FiusaLv12

Yeaaahh! Me too!

Malfini:I love the whole origin abilities. I just hate everything to do with it being Xianxia. If this was a Japanese, Korean, or western novel, I feel it’d be a lot better.
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One of my favs. Currently up to date at Chapter 551. Glad to see this novel made it here. I'll try and leave a semi-detailed review. Starts out slow and the MC doesn't feel strong, but then boom, MC gets really OP and the story just takes off. Don't abandon it, trust me it gets amazing. I also love the detailed explanations and the effort the author puts into makes everything sound plausible and logical. World-building is amazing. Initially it's very lacking but as more and more details are revealed, you start to see the scope of the world and understand the situation a lot better. Def wait before judging the world-building. Characters are amazing too. Have their own beliefs and personalities. You understand how different characters think and when the focus shifts to a different character, you instantly get an idea of how he's going to act. The villains are great too. Some are kinda one-dimensional but others(like *minor spoilers* a certain head of a family) are actually well-developed characters. MC feels strong but not totally OP and there's some really decent conflicts here. I absolutely adore how he uses his brain to solve everything. You can see his thought process and can foresee his plans and how he experiments with his ability and it makes him feel a lot more relatable. The reader can follow alongside his plans and ideas. Like, one minute you'll be like "what if he does this thing with that thing" and 2 paragraphs later, he realizes that too, and does that thing and it's so satisfying. Honestly there's not much more I can say. Theres very few cliches and deus ex machinas and it never gets boring except for a little bit at the start. Definitely give it a read. I binged it in 2 days and loved it. Don't get discouraged by the slow starting point of the MC. Stick with it and it'll be a really great read.

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