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H41Lv23yrH41

Great job author! I loved all of the characters introduced, and they had so much depth which is amazing. I do think you should try to emphasize on their surroundings though. For example, try to bring it to life by giving an important scene more description (Are the surroundings cold? Are they warm? Is there anything out of place). These are just some suggestions for you. Otherwise, keep up the good work! :)

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I get tired writing too much about the scene, (It's just not fun to write for me, I get what you're saying tho). The setting is shown through several chapters that its autumn, and through multiple chapters, write about the wind and the cool breeze.

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