Review Detail of AnthonyCerbic in Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS)
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Couldn't go past 3 chapters. If later this story becomes good, I would not know. But so far... Too many characters, all of them feel the same, except for cat. Bad writing skill, it reads like a child is playing with dolls and keeps narrating which doll does what. The characters don't interact like real people would, author completely fails to depict any emotional reaction vividly, with gripping *******. For example, the group encounters bizarre, science-defying phenomenon - a telepathic talking cat - and what they discuss a literal minute later? Sleeping arrangements, who is going to sleep in which bed. Wow, such realistic reactions.
Extrasensory Perception System (EsPerS)
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Actually, yes there is a reason for that, but as the author said, it is explained later on. And it would be quite a huge spoiler if I revealed it here, cause it is connected to a lot of other things... So if someone is interested they can just read the novel.
SongWeaver:Too bad you didn't like it. About the situation that you mentioned, there's a reason for that and it's explained later in the book.
I haven't read the Novel but i'm assuming the reason is because the Cat was telepathic and made them act like idiots?
WiseRage:Actually, yes there is a reason for that, but as the author said, it is explained later on. And it would be quite a huge spoiler if I revealed it here, cause it is connected to a lot of other things... So if someone is interested they can just read the novel.
I mean come on dude, you read 3 chapters, just 3 chapters and put a 2.5 rating review down? Earlier today I read finished reading 220 chapters of "Soverign of the Karmic System", and criticised the novel for randomly ruining MC's efforts in all the previous chapters by letting the system take over him for 2 ½ years! It's just not right for you to go around putting reviews after barely reading and understanding the author's view.
I mean come on dude, you read 3 chapters, just 3 chapters and put a 2.5 rating review down? Earlier today I read finished reading 220 chapters of "Soverign of the Karmic System", and criticised the novel for randomly ruining MC's efforts in all the previous chapters by letting the system take over him for 2 ½ years! It's just not right for you to go around putting reviews after barely reading and understanding the author's view.
If this is not right "for me", chances are its not right for someone else too, and that poor person must be warned. This is my duty, as a valiant and noble reader following true celestial dao of light novelship. And if you like chewing spiky bitter cacti for 200 chapters in hopes "maybe they will become good later", then find your throat shredded and stomach punctured to be the only valid reason to complain midly, well, I salute you... hm... courage. Yes, definitely courage is I wanted to say all along.
NL1693:I mean come on dude, you read 3 chapters, just 3 chapters and put a 2.5 rating review down? Earlier today I read finished reading 220 chapters of "Soverign of the Karmic System", and criticised the novel for randomly ruining MC's efforts in all the previous chapters by letting the system take over him for 2 ½ years! It's just not right for you to go around putting reviews after barely reading and understanding the author's view.
I definitely agree with you on that part, but I didn't read 200 chapters to maybe find something better later onwards, I wrote a review after 200 chapters cause chapter 222 (if I'm not mistaken) just flipped the story on it's head, and just like you, I felt that it's my duty to let others know that they would be extremely disappointed after enjoying their read when they realize that the system too over the MC, ruined his life and then MC goes "well I can't burden the people I love and want to protect so I'll distance them from me". First thing he does after taking back his body is kicking his sister, hey husband, and their son out of his dimension, and breaks all boobs with them cause now he has the ability to feel others emotions and look at why they felt thorough their eyes. The story just does a 180 and lots of people are not gonna like that. But you saying it's not right for you 3 chapters in and others are not gonna like it 3 chapters in is unlikely, though probable. Not trying to criticize or pick on you but you should give the story a try it's gets better and though the grammatical errors are there it's easy to get what the author is trying to convey. Oh, and if you have done novels that you found interesting do recommend them for me.
AnthonyCerbic:If this is not right "for me", chances are its not right for someone else too, and that poor person must be warned. This is my duty, as a valiant and noble reader following true celestial dao of light novelship. And if you like chewing spiky bitter cacti for 200 chapters in hopes "maybe they will become good later", then find your throat shredded and stomach punctured to be the only valid reason to complain midly, well, I salute you... hm... courage. Yes, definitely courage is I wanted to say all along.
Reading "Lord of the Mysteries" now - excellent pacing, novel world-building, not OP MC, vivid and believable cast. "The Great Storyteller" - slice of life with a touch of magical realism, barely for flavor. The writing skill is absolutely superb! Reading this novel is like drinking soft dreams. "The Legendary Mechanic" - OP MC is boring, but the fights are greatly detailed, action-packed and engaging. Ultimately dropped, since I don't care for unreasonable constant winning, yet this one is admittedly is a head above the crowd. "Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God" - I went pretty far (1000+ ch) before I caught onto what is the author doing... slimy trick, but works. "Reborn: Apocalypse" - one of the better variations on the "come back in time to change the fate". Power scaling doesn't look broken, the protagonist is not insane, the world is perculiar.
NL1693:I definitely agree with you on that part, but I didn't read 200 chapters to maybe find something better later onwards, I wrote a review after 200 chapters cause chapter 222 (if I'm not mistaken) just flipped the story on it's head, and just like you, I felt that it's my duty to let others know that they would be extremely disappointed after enjoying their read when they realize that the system too over the MC, ruined his life and then MC goes "well I can't burden the people I love and want to protect so I'll distance them from me". First thing he does after taking back his body is kicking his sister, hey husband, and their son out of his dimension, and breaks all boobs with them cause now he has the ability to feel others emotions and look at why they felt thorough their eyes. The story just does a 180 and lots of people are not gonna like that. But you saying it's not right for you 3 chapters in and others are not gonna like it 3 chapters in is unlikely, though probable. Not trying to criticize or pick on you but you should give the story a try it's gets better and though the grammatical errors are there it's easy to get what the author is trying to convey. Oh, and if you have done novels that you found interesting do recommend them for me.
Thanks a bunch, I'll try out "Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God" before checking "Lord of the Mysteries" out. I've already read "The Legendary Mechanic", though I dropped it a couple 2 digits chapters in. "The Great Storyteller" seems interesting. Thanks again.
AnthonyCerbic:Reading "Lord of the Mysteries" now - excellent pacing, novel world-building, not OP MC, vivid and believable cast. "The Great Storyteller" - slice of life with a touch of magical realism, barely for flavor. The writing skill is absolutely superb! Reading this novel is like drinking soft dreams. "The Legendary Mechanic" - OP MC is boring, but the fights are greatly detailed, action-packed and engaging. Ultimately dropped, since I don't care for unreasonable constant winning, yet this one is admittedly is a head above the crowd. "Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God" - I went pretty far (1000+ ch) before I caught onto what is the author doing... slimy trick, but works. "Reborn: Apocalypse" - one of the better variations on the "come back in time to change the fate". Power scaling doesn't look broken, the protagonist is not insane, the world is perculiar.
Thanks a bunch, I'll try out "Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God" before checking "Lord of the Mysteries" out. I've already read "The Legendary Mechanic", though I dropped it a couple 2 digits chapters in. "The Great Storyteller" seems interesting. Thanks again.
AnthonyCerbic:Reading "Lord of the Mysteries" now - excellent pacing, novel world-building, not OP MC, vivid and believable cast. "The Great Storyteller" - slice of life with a touch of magical realism, barely for flavor. The writing skill is absolutely superb! Reading this novel is like drinking soft dreams. "The Legendary Mechanic" - OP MC is boring, but the fights are greatly detailed, action-packed and engaging. Ultimately dropped, since I don't care for unreasonable constant winning, yet this one is admittedly is a head above the crowd. "Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God" - I went pretty far (1000+ ch) before I caught onto what is the author doing... slimy trick, but works. "Reborn: Apocalypse" - one of the better variations on the "come back in time to change the fate". Power scaling doesn't look broken, the protagonist is not insane, the world is perculiar.
bruh you really know how knockout someone with your words 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I have read about 16 chapters of this novel and honestly it's a bit boring in the beginning, but i will read a few more and if nothing change then I will have to say goodbye to this novel.
AnthonyCerbic:If this is not right "for me", chances are its not right for someone else too, and that poor person must be warned. This is my duty, as a valiant and noble reader following true celestial dao of light novelship. And if you like chewing spiky bitter cacti for 200 chapters in hopes "maybe they will become good later", then find your throat shredded and stomach punctured to be the only valid reason to complain midly, well, I salute you... hm... courage. Yes, definitely courage is I wanted to say all along.