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Neobear
NeobearAuthor6yr
2018-08-18 18:54

Hi guys, created something here so if you guys got questions regarding the story, can ask me here. I will try to question them as best as I could without revealing too much of the plot/unrevealed story. Also learning from everyone ... shameless 5 stars self-review... cause more reviews XD

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Neobear
NeobearAuthor

I meant i will answer them ... brain dying...

Randomlyrandom
RandomlyrandomLv14

You will question them... How judgemental of you.

Neobear
NeobearAuthor

lol i meant answer ... theres no edit function XD

Randomlyrandom:You will question them... How judgemental of you.
DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6

Hey author will the mc get to use magic or only people for me planet can use then btw i did not stsr reading yet so can you tell me...

DipTheDoggie
DipTheDoggieLv5

Whos the MC lol? Also will the crew be able to use magic etc in the future?

Neobear
NeobearAuthor

there are multiple MCs in my story, as it is talking about the crews' experiences

DipTheDoggie:Whos the MC lol? Also will the crew be able to use magic etc in the future?
KingGeorg
KingGeorgLv14

Im still pondering about how the planet is bigger yet has less of a gravitational pull..... this must have a reason, doesn’t it?

Neobear
NeobearAuthor

=) shhhh.... the earth is ho***w =P

KingGeorg:Im still pondering about how the planet is bigger yet has less of a gravitational pull..... this must have a reason, doesn’t it?
soloneko
solonekoLv5

can i ask? who is the MC?

Neobear
NeobearAuthor

The Captain primarily.

soloneko:can i ask? who is the MC?
KingGeorg
KingGeorgLv14

Unnatural to the core .. :>

Neobear:=) shhhh.... the earth is ho***w =P
Scarecrow_West
Scarecrow_WestLv13

When reading they character mentioned 'the New World' and 'the Old World' but the most resent map only holds 1 large continent. Just how big is the world? is 'the Old World' going to pop back up later in the story?

Neobear
NeobearAuthor

its sci fi fantasy dude ... =P

KingGeorg:Unnatural to the core .. :>
Neobear
NeobearAuthor

Im only releasing what information the humans have at the time, in this case, an old map of the New World... and yes the old world will pop up in the later story arcs

Scarecrow_West:When reading they character mentioned 'the New World' and 'the Old World' but the most resent map only holds 1 large continent. Just how big is the world? is 'the Old World' going to pop back up later in the story?
Neobear
NeobearAuthor

for now only the ppl in the planet ... the ship's doctor is still investigating how magic works ~

DarkKnight32:Hey author will the mc get to use magic or only people for me planet can use then btw i did not stsr reading yet so can you tell me...
KingGeorg
KingGeorgLv14

That’s what I meant by it :p

Neobear:its sci fi fantasy dude ... =P
Kertrjd
KertrjdLv4

Autor how many chapter can you release ?? And hope u make it 10/week always there supporting you SUGGESTION (you should place ads on ur novel soo u can earn money and help you release more chapter 😋😋😋😋😋

Neobear
NeobearAuthor

for RRL and WN, i released weekdays only, 5 chapters/wk. For patreon now currently is 6 chapters a week (mon-sat)

Kertrjd:Autor how many chapter can you release ?? And hope u make it 10/week always there supporting you SUGGESTION (you should place ads on ur novel soo u can earn money and help you release more chapter 😋😋😋😋😋
kimthal
kimthalLv5

Could you make an auxiliar chapter explaining the marine's ranks? For non native english speakers mostly...

Neobear
NeobearAuthor

i did list out all the ranks of both the navy and marines Officers (Fleet / Marines) Admiral / General Vice Admiral / Lieutenant General Rear Admiral / Colonel Captain / Lieutenant Colonel Commander / Major Lieutenant Commander / Captain Lieutenant 1st Class Lieutenant 2nd Class Ensign NCOs Master Chief Petty Officer / Master Sergeant Senior Chief Petty Officer / Staff Sergeant Chief Petty Officer / Sergeant 1st Class Petty Officer 1st Class / Sergeant 2nd Class Petty Officer 2nd Class / Sergeant 3rd Class Enlisted Spaceman Senior / Corporal Spaceman / Lance Corporal Spaceman Apprentice / Private Spaceman Recruit / Recruit

kimthal:Could you make an auxiliar chapter explaining the marine's ranks? For non native english speakers mostly...
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N0xiety
N0xietyLv7

Feels like a cheap hollywood flick. Things happen the way they do because plot needs it, not because it makes sense. Marines can't use 'armor piercing bullets' inside the ship because 'they don't want marines to blow half the ship into oblivion', yet marines get pushed back because the sorry excuse of a bullet they are allowed to use can't even penetrate the bugs carapace. They have to shoot at the bugs open mouth or the joints to even do damage! Yeah right... With such redundant weapons ofc the things don't go well. Marines are killed in droves and they are being pushed back so bad, they start using grenades that throw around tungsten balls that turn into plasma and can pierce the bugs and leave the hull of the ship riddled with holes. The Captain is informed that the situation is getting desperate and %80 of the defenders in one of the engineering section is dead, so they ask to use the armor piercing bullets, but NOOOO. It is not allowed, keep using grenades good chaps and leave the ship riddled with holes haha! Oh also, keep being meat shields haha! Enjoy getting eaten alive by bugs hahaha! What a great idea! They don't even trust their own marines to use armor piercing bullets because 'it might pierce into the reactor core and blow the ship'. Seriously? So they use grenades which can do much worse instead? The notion of armor piercing bullets going through the walls and reaching the reactor is already ridiculous enough, a reactor room shouldn't be so unprotected, but even if such a worry is real, why would they use such powerful grenades then? Their 'ceramic bullets' that don't pierce the hull of the ship also can't pierce the bugs carapace. So by logic, this grenade that sends tungsten plasma projectiles which can pierce the bugs carapace, can also pierce the hull of the ship! If not, why would they make the ceramic bullets so useless? If the grenade doesn't pierce the hull, but can pierce the bugs, then why would they not make a bullet that can actually work just as well as the grenade!? See, this is the logic hole i'm talking about! Anyways, because they are not allowed to use armor piercing bullets and because they are slow at clearing out the bugs that breached into the ship, the bugs reach a conduit and everything goos BOOM. Ship is done for. All because they were afraid their own marines can't shoot straight and the somehow 'so overpowered armor piercing bullets could pierce the reactor'. Sigh... The best way to describe what i'm feeling right now would be 'feels like a cheap hollywood flick'. Disappointing. Very disappointing...

ShEsHy
ShEsHyLv5
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