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Roktah
RoktahLv156yr
2018-07-25 02:11

Writing is ok stability is ok Story development: 1 star. you can see that the author doesnt know where he is going with this. MC gets reincanated in the body of the dragon god at max lvl. First thing he does is accept a 7 year old disciple with attitude. the mc agrees to save his village and then tells him to save the village himself while giving him a god lvl weapon and then promises to help him if it gets dangerous. what is the mc planning to do next, raise this 7 year old child while hitting in the mom who just lost her husband? well i guess we'll see. Character:well, the child has an attitude and the mc says yes to whatever people tell him to do while acting like he's thinking about it.disciple,ok.save village,ok.powerful weapon here you go.He has actually accepted his disciple whole heatedly in one day. what is this? world: not really done yet, but it is only chapter 12.

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Fallen_Raiji
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Wang Chao hadn't given the sword yet. Also the disciple thing you can figure it out. Wang Chao did not wholeheartedly accepted Lu Cheng as a disciple at the very start. The weapon is just for Lu Cheng to pass the gaps of levels only temporary, because there's no free launch. Also they had an agreement where Lu Cheng shamelessly pass the condition (It was suppose to be a funny chapter... but guess nah.) And Wang Chao had to do it cause he already made the promise, to save them. He did not do it wholeheartedly do it cause he was his disciple. (That would be pathetic to let the MC to get controlled easily.) I just want the MC to go to the world background that's all :'(.

Roktah
RoktahLv15

if that was supposed to be a funny chapter than the delivery was horrible. The weapon thing was dumb too, he ensured that nothing would happen so while the child had to do some work no danger was involved, so in a sense it was still a free meal. the disciple was accepted whole heartedly after one day,so i would still call it the start. while the mc is strong, he did'nt do anything to aquire that power, so whats he gonna do? teach his earth martial art?he knows how to use some magic, but can he teach it? i just wished he would have explored some more before getting involved with the locals in such a way, saving his village why not, but why the disciple thing 5 chapters into the novel. There is time for that 100-200 chapters in before that is a little early deoending on the amount of content per chapter.

Fallen_Raiji:Wang Chao hadn't given the sword yet. Also the disciple thing you can figure it out. Wang Chao did not wholeheartedly accepted Lu Cheng as a disciple at the very start. The weapon is just for Lu Cheng to pass the gaps of levels only temporary, because there's no free launch. Also they had an agreement where Lu Cheng shamelessly pass the condition (It was suppose to be a funny chapter... but guess nah.) And Wang Chao had to do it cause he already made the promise, to save them. He did not do it wholeheartedly do it cause he was his disciple. (That would be pathetic to let the MC to get controlled easily.) I just want the MC to go to the world background that's all :'(.
Fallen_Raiji
Fallen_RaijiAuthor

My bad! I will improve as time goes by, i"m just a beginner author after all. I written this out of my whim.

Roktah:if that was supposed to be a funny chapter than the delivery was horrible. The weapon thing was dumb too, he ensured that nothing would happen so while the child had to do some work no danger was involved, so in a sense it was still a free meal. the disciple was accepted whole heartedly after one day,so i would still call it the start. while the mc is strong, he did'nt do anything to aquire that power, so whats he gonna do? teach his earth martial art?he knows how to use some magic, but can he teach it? i just wished he would have explored some more before getting involved with the locals in such a way, saving his village why not, but why the disciple thing 5 chapters into the novel. There is time for that 100-200 chapters in before that is a little early deoending on the amount of content per chapter.
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