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Review Detail of Rakshademon in Yours, Ours, Us

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Rakshademon
RakshademonLv145yrRakshademon

I’m sorry to do this, as I’m usually all for supporting original stories BUT I can totally see that practically 90% of your story is modeled off the book “Doomed To Be Cannon Fodder” (炮灰女配) by Whistling Night Rain (潇潇夜雨). You’ve tried to add your own plot twists to make it seem different but I’ve read all your chapters here to be sure and yes, you’ve basically ripped off most of the storyline from the original novel. I don’t want to be a tattletale or whatever but it’s just not right that you’re claiming this to be an original story when it’s not. 😕

Yours, Ours, Us

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Lonely_citizen
Lonely_citizenLv13Lonely_citizen

True

Empress_Innocent
Empress_InnocentAuthorEmpress_Innocent

Sorry about that it looked like 90% of it was from Doomed With Cannon Fodder. I had used it as my inspiration but forgot to add it's credits. The beginning is very similar to it even I say so myself, but going on, the story branches off into something different. I think I should apologize first for the 20 chapters long intro, though. I finally finished with the beginning, so now it should start having it's own taste to it soon. Also thanks to you I can remember to edit my Auxiliary page to put in the credits.

Abbyzworld
AbbyzworldLv15Abbyzworld

true but a lot of authors are doing this and yet their story line still becomes interesting