Review Detail of ChocoLatte in My Beautiful Commander
Review detail
Don't get me wrong with the amount of stars I'm giving. The story is okay with the right amount of cuteness and comedy. However, having the MC being 13 years old for the amount of chapters given at the moment, I don't think that we will get to see a proper ending for a novel that is neither contracted nor having regular updates. So far, the updates haven't been that consistent (same goes for your other novels). Up till now she is still 13 and funny thing is, she said that she intend to travel for 3years, I assume that there will be a 3years time skip with her grown up appearance and gathering flies right after he gave her the whip and bid goodbye. But noooo. I feel as tho everything is just fillers after fillers afterwards just to drag I-don't-know-what. Basically I'm dropping because I find it too draggy. It's like reading 13years old Phoenix without the romance and time skip which just drags on and on even tho the amount of chapters is already long enough. Thank you however, for making time to write. (:
My Beautiful Commander
neha_
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ChocoLatte:I see. So it's finally contracted. I'd say congratulations. But yes, sadly I am still dropping this novel as I feel draggy imo. Keep up the good work tho.
neha_:Well, I respect your opinion. But I need to tell you that the novel is contracted and I am not in the right health which is the reason for the unstable updates. I can't give any reasons if you find the plot draggy because it is an essential part of story development. Thanks for reading it :)