The story was ok until author in one of the latest chapters basically decided to NTR mc... which i strongly disapprove, NTR is a trash fetish, even if someone says its not really NTR chapter left a bad aftertaste, sooo im dropping it. ( you would say " duude its just one chapter" well it seems author want to do this more in the future so... no) P.S. im not even talking about this "ichigo" practically raping Inoue... this is wrong you cant just rape probably one of the best waifus in bleach for which i will say, Author **** you.

After reading up to chapter 40 this is what I think you should fix. First of all, you should really start to take grammar more seriously as it distracts viewers from the story. Second, please think more on the dialogue and not just make things up on the fly. I've watched Bleach before and the way you present these characters through dialogue just doesn't match up to the way you present them. I guess you could use the MC to influence them into becoming the character you portray, but it would have to be a gradual process and not just a instantaneous event..I almost forgot, Please for the love of god stop the swearing in every other conversation. It's fine if you do it to add emphasis, but you can't just keep using cuss words so frequently cause, again, it doesn't fit in with the Bleach world. And finally, please don't make this into a harem and take a step back. When I read how ICHIGO just grabbed INOUE's ass, I internally cringed cause it just came out of nowhere. But just from...interaction, I can tell that you're probably gonna do the,"Protagonist sees pretty girl and then go f**ks her in the next chapter" trope. I know you know something about how an actual relationship works, or at least how it's suppose to work so please don't just ignore common sense and/or common decency while writing about relationships. I am fully aware that at the end of the day you are the author, I am a random viewer, and anything can be whatever you want it to be when you write your story. I just always liked the concept of fanfictions, because it explores so many alternatives to original story. I have seen so many good fanfictions that just blew me away cause it went in a direction that I never even thought of; some even blew me away cause even though it went in a predictable direction it just did it beautifully. I never write reviews and I understand that this is a long rant but for some reason I find myself caring about your improvement...Oh and please stop capitalizing the characters' names; just capitalizing the first letter is enough.

Unreasoned garbage written by a schoolboy 12 years old. To turn into something readable you need a complete recycling. Not recommended for reading in the current form.

Give it a ride first, don't eat those F.u.c.k.i.n.g retarded reviewer. Everyone has their own taste. For me, this one is an amazing piece fan-fic. And first thing first the stability of the update ^^b

I could not get through the first chapter. This fanfiction is so sloppy and fast paced, with brief and unrealistic interactions. It's like something I would have read in elementary school to satisfy a shattered ego and a need for self insertion as the main character. The speech follows formatting that makes one think the entire chapter was a brief idea the author had in the shower and wrote down while in. Causing the ink to run and thus giving birth to all those typos and lack of cohesive flow. I would be able to look past this as English is the authors second language, would the author have created some type of exposition to explain why the mc was able to just go with it like it was normal. This alone did not give me hope for it. I had a peak at the formatting of the 48th chapter to see if it improved. And I am glad to say it did not, as that would mean I might have given the story a chance. To any one reading, should you want a bleach system in a another world, try god of soul system, it is in the one piece world a few years before the main story. Should you want any system that just is amazing, try either ultimate scheming system or the strongest system, both of which are on webnovel. Personally if you want to give it a shot, giving valiant life, which is an encyclopedia that give the owner godlike ability of a single profession per page, is a hilarious read. It being one of my new top reads, I'd strongly recommend you try it instead of wasting time on this dumpster fire.

This author definitely has a retardeed genes, like how tf did you creat a fanfic this bad? It’s actually impressive, i normally don’t review or bash novels i read, but this...i don’t even wanna say anything, just don’t waste your time reading this, the only good thing about this novel is it has lots of chapters

Quest - Main Get the reader frustrated and absorb the negative energies!? Quest - Successful. Honestly, Fan-fictions can be whatever the writer wants, but I think this book dosen't have any proper continuation, rapid and indistinguishable time-skips, and no proper characters, they are all 1-D CHARACTERS. sorry caps on. Fact - Only the writer in his fragmented writings can truly understand the story, It maybe a great story or not, but we have no way to know, and that's the mystery.

i would've given zero stars if it was possible, it's wish fulfillment *** fantasy where all bleach characters are butchered and turned into a mix of psychotic, giggling, childish, yes men.

so don't read all those reviews that are written around the early chapters. there is no NTR. it just looks like it is at first till you read a bit further and you realise it was a misunderstanding. the story is 3/7 wish fulfilment (making a harem) and 4/7 story. the way the story is played out is very interesting and refreshing to read. and the power balance is done very well. (though at the start its a bit confusing since the author using "." instead of "," making 1k look like 1.000 instead of 1,000) the chapter length is somewhat short but there are 2 or more chapters a day so that makes up for it. the grammar isn't the best but it is just minor mistakes most of the time. I recommend giving this novel a shot and see for your self instead of looking at a few ****y reviews.