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Daoist707
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2018-08-06 07:37

So far so good, though, there's a lot of typos hahahaha. Keep improving Author, and please increase your release chapters, I really love reading mystery!

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Hi Everyone! This is my first time writing a story so please forgive me if ever you found any wrong grammars and stuffs. Don't worry I will edit those when i finish this volume. I hope you give this novel a chance to be part of your library! A little Introduction about this novel Setting: The setting of the novel is called Country P. Actually, this country doesn't exist and I'm just making it up. Not just the country, but all of the places in the novel. b Characters: The Main Character on the story is called Red. Red is a Jack of all Trades on solving mysteries and his also the top student of MS Academy for Detectives. His character in the early chapters is kinda bit silent. The reason for that is because I'm giving the spotlight on the other characters first. Next, let's have Leo. Leo is a Manipulator and also the most miserable of all the characters. He keeps on acting arrogant in front of the gang, but every time he does it backfires on him. Next, James. James is a Casanova type of character. His best friend is Leo, they like to fool around, specially if its related to money (This will be show in the future chapters). Next, Marvin. Marvin is a Assassin. His the silent type character, and he doesn't like to talk and every he does, it will be direct or straight to the point. Although his like that, his actually the most honest and trustful member of the gang. Next, Vladimir. Vladimir is a DramaQueen. If you ever wonder why queen instead of King? you will know it by reading the story, why DramaQueen instead of DramaKing. Vladimir always act in his every actions, maybe you'll also believe and thought that what he showed is the true him. Lastly. Vanessa. Vanessa is a Hacker. She acts like the most perfect girlfriend every boy wants to have, but give her a computer and you will see a totally different type of her. Also, she's obsess with Red, so you better not hope that those boys in the gang will have a chance with her, because she's only thinking of Red. There are still 3 more characters whom are part of Red's Detective squad. I wont be introducing them yet, because they haven't appeared yet. Keep reading and you will know who this characters are and the way they act and talent. (I will be editing my post every time so you better be active so that you will know more about the story) Thank you for reading and I hope you like it!

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