Review Detail of vikimaniac in Divine Emperor of Death

First off, I am new to the story and have read the free chapters till now. The Author has excellent imagination and a great story concept. The World he has imagined is amazing. The characters are great and the rate of update is stable as far as I can see. Unfortunately, the grammar is poor (I am being lenient here) The method of writing the story is even worse. The story does not build any background of scenes. It just states what is happening without giving any thought to the flow of prose. All in all, an amazingly excellent story that is so poorly written that the prose is dragging it's ranking down by atleast 80%. Hoping that the author learns how to make use of the flow. If the words flow and the paragraphs connect alongwith scene descriptions, the Novel would be one to spend money and time on. Otherwise, I WILL drop it once the free chapters are over.