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Smooth Hao. oh my.
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oh. you twerp. but the numbers are nice to look at 888-999
Well, the delay in the chapter is so long that I have to read atleast the last 2-3 chapters to remember where the story was. It (the chapter) is a gift because I still enjoy the story, but it's very late. not well timed.
didn't they become cultivators because of the rich Qi in the Pagoda?
Shen Bao is freaking cheat... ha ha ha...
wasn't it an ant with a goblins to head?
seagrams royal stag sponsor this???
ama zon. Duh! Those who read are considered the best of minds. But, now, I'm reminded of Moose from Archie's
rout not route.
Bro, please use Soon in place of Not long.. It makes better reading sense.
Let me add to my review. The Author should learn flow from one or more of the following: Realms of Myths and Legends, World Domination System or even better, Rise of the Undead Legion. The last 2 are finished, while the First is ongoing. But, the improvement shown by Biako with his writing in ROTUL is something that you actually need to grasp. I am not sure if you have graduated from the poor flow class, but, the flow of prose is very important when making a novel and not a history textbook.
Well, I finished it quite a long back and know that my guess is only partially true and the next novel that was promised, it seems the author died... The sequel is dead and seems will remain unfinished. So, don't hope for a proper conclusion in the mainland at all. Though most of the secrets of Angaria are revealed, not much happens further.
First off, I am new to the story and have read the free chapters till now. The Author has excellent imagination and a great story concept. The World he has imagined is amazing. The characters are great and the rate of update is stable as far as I can see. Unfortunately, the grammar is poor (I am being lenient here) The method of writing the story is even worse. The story does not build any background of scenes. It just states what is happening without giving any thought to the flow of prose. All in all, an amazingly excellent story that is so poorly written that the prose is dragging it's ranking down by atleast 80%. Hoping that the author learns how to make use of the flow. If the words flow and the paragraphs connect alongwith scene descriptions, the Novel would be one to spend money and time on. Otherwise, I WILL drop it once the free chapters are over.