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maeAkua
maeAkuaLv105yr
2019-02-12 18:10

The stones are way too expensive plus the relationship between ML and FL is taking too long to develop. ML interest in the FL is not encouraging, if it's the author's way of keeping suspense then I think suspense technique should be reviewed as this is too dragging. Might cause readers to loose interest.

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maeAkua
maeAkuaLv10

Hmmm

MintCatnip
MintCatnipLv5

This is definitely not for those who expect ML and FL to immediately get together in just a few chapters. Also not for those who do not like novels with a more real life setting. I feel that Author wanted people to adopt a more conservative stance to get to know someone better before accepting someone into their lives. Maybe I’m more inclined toward the cases so the romance portion is fine for me. The ML here has a story behind his behavior, which will be unraveled as story progresses.

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blahbalhhblahLv4

Now you've persuaded me to read this novel. Hahahhahaha. I am actually trying to find a book that is a bit realistic and doesn't immediately jump into the romance like one look at her and then, wow, he's in love XD. Like seriously, it's almost cliché now in qidian. So thank you for your reply :)

MintCatnip:This is definitely not for those who expect ML and FL to immediately get together in just a few chapters. Also not for those who do not like novels with a more real life setting. I feel that Author wanted people to adopt a more conservative stance to get to know someone better before accepting someone into their lives. Maybe I’m more inclined toward the cases so the romance portion is fine for me. The ML here has a story behind his behavior, which will be unraveled as story progresses.
Harshada_Patil_74
Harshada_Patil_74Lv3

You re right

Harshada_Patil_74
Harshada_Patil_74Lv3

You re right

Harshada_Patil_74
Harshada_Patil_74Lv3

You re right

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