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Chaos_Overseer
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2018-07-03 16:24

The author here, I love the idea of a man with modern knowledge traveling to the past where there was the most conflict, a great what if scenario. I hope to use Historical accurate data, make it balanced, a good system to make certain things happen. And be to more battlefields than just one. I will use some terminology which could be viewed as difficult. I'll try my best, hope you enjoy reading this type of book. A REAL Modern military Fiction. I am rating it 5 stars just for the sake of a foundation.

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Kirora
KiroraLv5

I tend to just fēsian when I eat cool beans it make me have cool jeans 👖, oh I am also feeling Alicrity for the second reply to your review.

Axcart
AxcartLv6

I imagine the same thing some times but mine ivolves having native americans tamed dinosours and super high syfy nano enhancements to their dnd (super wariors coming with their war dinos

Axcart
AxcartLv6

That will show does Europeans

palee
paleeLv10

Is the genre and storyline like a step into the past?

Chaos_Overseer
Chaos_OverseerAuthor

Please explain a bit more what you mean, I am not sure how to answer your question

palee:Is the genre and storyline like a step into the past?
palee
paleeLv10

Like is the mc change the course of history or butterfly effect plot and etc

Chaos_Overseer:Please explain a bit more what you mean, I am not sure how to answer your question
Chaos_Overseer
Chaos_OverseerAuthor

Difficult to explain, Yes the MC is going to change the course of History, And yes there will be a butterfly effect. Read the book a bit you might find out better :)

palee:Like is the mc change the course of history or butterfly effect plot and etc
TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv15

Will there be romance

Chaos_Overseer
Chaos_OverseerAuthor

Currently there is an Idea I have for it, but it will be a late romance subplot :)

TigerBlooImmortal:Will there be romance
Lonely_citizen
Lonely_citizenLv13

There’s no harem right

Lonely_citizen
Lonely_citizenLv13

Pls let their be no harem

Chaos_Overseer
Chaos_OverseerAuthor

Hell No, harem shall not exist in any of my works!

Lonely_citizen:There’s no harem right
Ethos493
Ethos493Lv4

I think, what you should consider is the multiverse theory. In Non-linear time, time can be branched out into many timelines. So, this will be an alternate timeline.

Ethos493
Ethos493Lv4

Also, I like what you’re doing. There’s very little people doing novels like these. But I gotta ask, will you consider going to proxy wars around the world at the height of the Cold War (I.E. - The Angolan Civil War, The Chinese Civil War, The Ugandan Bush War, The South-East African Bush war, Rhodesian bush war and such proxy wars) around at the time?

Chaos_Overseer
Chaos_OverseerAuthor

You shall see, but yes focus on proxy wars shall happen

Ethos493:Also, I like what you’re doing. There’s very little people doing novels like these. But I gotta ask, will you consider going to proxy wars around the world at the height of the Cold War (I.E. - The Angolan Civil War, The Chinese Civil War, The Ugandan Bush War, The South-East African Bush war, Rhodesian bush war and such proxy wars) around at the time?
Mrtokkadi
MrtokkadiLv4

I would like to be an editor

Chaos_Overseer
Chaos_OverseerAuthor

Great, I have been trying to look for one, join this discord (if you have it) so we can discuss in more detail: https://discord.gg/aGyVb4

Mrtokkadi:I would like to be an editor
Innovation
InnovationLv6

Just a ****** question, in the synopsis, it is written "Kyle wit", is it normal? Is his name wit and therefore, needed a Wit, a cap at the beginning or is the wit something else?

Chaos_Overseer:Great, I have been trying to look for one, join this discord (if you have it) so we can discuss in more detail: https://discord.gg/aGyVb4
Chaos_Overseer
Chaos_OverseerAuthor

Kyle Wit is his full name, Wit is white in Dutch, but he calls himself in the book Kyle White honestly thought of just making it Kyle White, but to much editing would be needed now

Innovation:Just a ****** question, in the synopsis, it is written "Kyle wit", is it normal? Is his name wit and therefore, needed a Wit, a cap at the beginning or is the wit something else?
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