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SlimJim
SlimJimLv66yr
2018-10-03 19:55

This is an interesting story becuase it breaks the mold of the typical cultivatation novels. This is pure comedy so far, so your milage may vary depending on what sort of humour you are into. The first few chapters are a little rough but if you hold out through them then the thrust of the story is revealed and if it's to your liking you will have a real gem to read. The story wasn't for me but I know that it deserves a chance because I can see plenty of other people would like it if they get through the first 2 chapters (which is better than some stories where you have to white-knuckle 20-50 chapters just to determine if it's sh*t or not).

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LordTurtle
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Same weird comedy that's abundant in the original Chinese webnovels is again used in an original novel! The overuse of "misunderstandings" trope is so much that it got unbearable atleast for me. I understand the title of the novel is not a cultivator but still is the MC going to stay a mortal all his life hiding behind others? He gets stabbed by his crazy yandere fiance and he can't do **** to even stop or protect himself as he's a mortal trash. That yandere ***** should be killed first. Everyone misunderstands the MC for even the tiniest things. There are hit fan favourite comedy or action/cultivation novels that use this trope a lot but they are applied more naturally. The MC gets to faceslap everyone but here the MC gets slapped either way. His father a prestigious clan leader couldn't get his son a couple of strong & reliable bodyguards. No he had to get two complete dumbasses that are weak & don't care about their duty. They give a small reason but after all the issues that they had caused they should have been executed. Really in such a world which clan wouldn't have shadow forces or secret strong bodyguards for the leader & young master of the clan? The guy couldn't just get him some absolutely loyal bodyguards that would be willing to take their own lives before revealing the truth about the MC's crippled/mortal status. Well it's my personal opinion and I'm dropping the novel. If anyone doesn't like some of the same things that I mentioned then you would be better off reading someother novel. But if you like this kind of comedy and would like to see how the MC is going to get out of all his troubles then please read. I know some like it. I appreciate the author's effort. Thank you.

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