Here's the deal, this is my second review of the novel since January 8th and an update on my previous thoughts. Imagine being introduced to an interesting world and concept in a deceptively unique way and getting hyped for the direction in which the novel may take. Now imagine that it doesn't stop introducing you... This novel feels like you're reading a summary to what happens in a much better novel of the same name. /MC or the Protagonist: /goes into dungeon alone, shows off his amazing skills (wowzers) then wins. MC gets into another impossibly difficult encounter with an incredibly powerful foe, MC wins again, except this time he has 5 people to clap for him as he struts about doing so. The novel spends too much time explaining how great the protagonist is and not enough time giving the reader what they really want... in other words, the mash and potatoes known as character development. Most of the enemies are virtually reduced to numbers and hit markers, which would be fine if the entire story didn't revolve around killing them. It's like reading a play by play of a World of warcraft raid. No ******* whether they win or lose as there happens to be a reviving function as it's a video game. Alas I got side tracted let's return to a previous point of mine. Making a character op is not really a huge bother for me. If it's done right. The problem is, the author has him acting and being treated like a haughty playground kindergartner who found out that he's really good at 4 square for the precise reason that no one else can jump. He has characters mentioning his op gaming prowess as his weird smarts or crazy intelligence when all he truly does is use a spell that he created before we even began reading the novel. Thus leaving us to contemplate whether he even made the damn thing because he doesn't show this "skill" again, atleast not til where I stopped. /World:/ why does he play this game, where'd he get it, what are the game rules, how come it's so popular that money in game is equivalent to real money, when is this taking place and who the **** is the sister he is supposed to be motivated to save? You can expect none of these questions to be answered as it seems the author is more keen to throw more giant numbers at the MC and then praise him for defeating them. That's it... really seriously that's all the story amounts to. All his relationships are based off of his incredible gaming prowess and they reek of something stank. I am just so annoyed by this Novel as it grabbed my attention and then became content to sit in it's own filth as it eventually smelled of rot.
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Great review. It reads like the kind of critique I would write if I was bulletpointing out the weak points of a story. RotSSG has the same problems but I can tell this story is ten times worse just from the way you describe it: What you point out and what isn't said about the framework of the writing. "Telling and not Showing" is one of the worst sins an Author can commit when trying to sell a Protagonist as 'Badass' by just having the peanut gallery fawn all over every ****** thing he does instead of letting his actions speak for themselves. And plot lines rehashed over and over again with just different Antagonists and bigger numbers is not Quality Writing, it's Lazy Filler, and shows a lack of creativity and unwillingness to step out of the Writers comfort zone at the expense of Reader retainability.
Thanks for the review. It saved me the trouble of reading this.
Thanks for the review. It saved me the trouble of reading this.
Thanks for the review. It saved me the trouble of reading this.
Thanks for the review. It saved me the trouble of reading this.
You may enjoy I Am the God of Games in the trial read. Check it out!
Wow, this great review gave the precise point of ... not to rea—i mean what the read will expect in the story XD
Thank you for the detail info.. Save me from wasting my time here.. [img=recommend]
