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SpinchPrise
SpinchPriseLv66yr
2019-01-07 16:45

Pretty good so far. I just hope he won't make an enemy with every guild he meets in the Game cuz that would be just another third-rate trash Game Novel. Lol This story is about a guy who's playing the game for a living and he said he's a hunk irl too. 🤣 We haven't been introduced much to the novel but I like the story so far.

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His0ka
His0kaLv6

Well hunk irl means harem zzZ <3 !

plastic_doll
plastic_dollLv5

If he's hunk that's even better! but please nooooo harem, just ruins the story.

SpinchPrise
SpinchPriseLv6

It's a modern day story so I doubt there would veva harem

His0ka:Well hunk irl means harem zzZ <3 !
HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

Is the mc op good sir? And don't call novels with op protagonists thrash, I personally quite enjoy them

HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

How can you possibly say no to harem, it's spices up the story!

plastic_doll:If he's hunk that's even better! but please nooooo harem, just ruins the story.
Denzel_theking
Denzel_thekingLv6

But it will be even worst if he ran from every enemy

SpinchPrise:It's a modern day story so I doubt there would veva harem
SpinchPrise
SpinchPriseLv6

I Didn't call him trash tho. I enjoy OP protag as well. I don't know if he's OP but he didn't seem to know his worth.. It's like he has no idea that he's good in the game.

HansTheCool:Is the mc op good sir? And don't call novels with op protagonists thrash, I personally quite enjoy them
SpinchPrise
SpinchPriseLv6

Try it, you might like it cuz there's atleast a 75% that he's an strong protag but not that overpowered.

HansTheCool:Is the mc op good sir? And don't call novels with op protagonists thrash, I personally quite enjoy them
SpinchPrise
SpinchPriseLv6

True, but I don't like it if the enemy is arrogant and repeats the previous villain's lines before getting defeated by the MC. Lol

Denzel_theking:But it will be even worst if he ran from every enemy
Denzel_theking
Denzel_thekingLv6

Yh sometimes the author should just focus on leveling up to much talking not that good

SpinchPrise:True, but I don't like it if the enemy is arrogant and repeats the previous villain's lines before getting defeated by the MC. Lol
HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

Tests unfortunate, I was actually looking forward to this book

SpinchPrise:Try it, you might like it cuz there's atleast a 75% that he's an strong protag but not that overpowered.
plastic_doll
plastic_dollLv5

Except too much spice makes one nauseous

HansTheCool:How can you possibly say no to harem, it's spices up the story!
HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5

Hey man, someone who's on drugs will accept more drugs despite his health considerations...I have no idea where I am going with this...

plastic_doll:Except too much spice makes one nauseous
DrunkenScholarHill
DrunkenScholarHillLv5

Here’s hoping he doesn’t become enemies it’s all he guilds. Maybe he can just continue on in small party? It seems like he doesn’t have an conflict with the guilds yet but he’ll probably be killed or scammed and lose his equipment then swear vengeance haha

MiLfL0VeR
MiLfL0VeRLv12

Lol even its modern there will be still a harem

SpinchPrise:It's a modern day story so I doubt there would veva harem
MiLfL0VeR
MiLfL0VeRLv12

Lol even its modern there will be still a harem

SpinchPrise:It's a modern day story so I doubt there would veva harem
SpinchPrise
SpinchPriseLv6

There's a higher chance that it will be not tho.

MiLfL0VeR:Lol even its modern there will be still a harem
MiLfL0VeR
MiLfL0VeRLv12

It depends on the author and i also like a harem that is well written not some ****y harems that most of the CN authors wrote

SpinchPrise:There's a higher chance that it will be not tho.
SpinchPrise
SpinchPriseLv6

Not that I hate harem novel but most novel with Harem tags revolve around saving girls and getting new girls, rinse and repeat. It geys boring very fast. Some of the other girls dont even appear often and will probably just show up after 15 or so chapters. But if he can deliver it in a unique way that I would like, I wont stopping anytime soon if by chance this novel turned out to be harem novel. ✌️

MiLfL0VeR:It depends on the author and i also like a harem that is well written not some ****y harems that most of the CN authors wrote
DaoistThreeFingers
DaoistThreeFingersLv6

Lol too much spice ruins a dish. One or two spice is enough for a dish to taste pretty good.

HansTheCool:How can you possibly say no to harem, it's spices up the story!
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InterestingTed
InterestingTedLv4

Here's the deal, this is my second review of the novel since January 8th and an update on my previous thoughts. Imagine being introduced to an interesting world and concept in a deceptively unique way and getting hyped for the direction in which the novel may take. Now imagine that it doesn't stop introducing you... This novel feels like you're reading a summary to what happens in a much better novel of the same name. /MC or the Protagonist: /goes into dungeon alone, shows off his amazing skills (wowzers) then wins. MC gets into another impossibly difficult encounter with an incredibly powerful foe, MC wins again, except this time he has 5 people to clap for him as he struts about doing so. The novel spends too much time explaining how great the protagonist is and not enough time giving the reader what they really want... in other words, the mash and potatoes known as character development. Most of the enemies are virtually reduced to numbers and hit markers, which would be fine if the entire story didn't revolve around killing them. It's like reading a play by play of a World of warcraft raid. No ******* whether they win or lose as there happens to be a reviving function as it's a video game. Alas I got side tracted let's return to a previous point of mine. Making a character op is not really a huge bother for me. If it's done right. The problem is, the author has him acting and being treated like a haughty playground kindergartner who found out that he's really good at 4 square for the precise reason that no one else can jump. He has characters mentioning his op gaming prowess as his weird smarts or crazy intelligence when all he truly does is use a spell that he created before we even began reading the novel. Thus leaving us to contemplate whether he even made the damn thing because he doesn't show this "skill" again, atleast not til where I stopped. /World:/ why does he play this game, where'd he get it, what are the game rules, how come it's so popular that money in game is equivalent to real money, when is this taking place and who the **** is the sister he is supposed to be motivated to save? You can expect none of these questions to be answered as it seems the author is more keen to throw more giant numbers at the MC and then praise him for defeating them. That's it... really seriously that's all the story amounts to. All his relationships are based off of his incredible gaming prowess and they reek of something stank. I am just so annoyed by this Novel as it grabbed my attention and then became content to sit in it's own filth as it eventually smelled of rot.

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