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TermiiiLv105yr
2019-11-20 08:08

my old review was deleted (I think I gave like 2.7 stars) this time I will not take an hour of my time to write an in-depth review. Why should I? This story is bad and it is getting worse over time, earlier chapters (until 100) are pretty good and promising. But at some point the author has stopped trying to write a good story and focused on writing as much as possible. The focus shifted to earning money which is TOTALLY FINE. But he sadly disregarded proofreading and story telling which is NOT FINE.

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chu_chanLv6

there are more of these authors. Piokilek deleted my sound review on his Chameleon novel, because I pointed out his synopsis is deceiving his potential readers, because 70 chapters in the powers described in the synopsis are untouched and so was the revenge which was advertised.

NoobKingDaBeastLv1

At which point? At the point, QIDIAN claimed this novel.

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