Review Detail of Mmoogl in Rise of The Undead Legion
Review detail
Fabulous. One of the best novels I've read, it's got details, a world, unique characters, and a good story, it's overall just a great and unique read. The only "not great" parts are firstly the information bombs that were dropped in the first few chapters, explaining how everything in the game worked and so on, which at first seems annoying to read, but you don't have to get stuck on it, as it'll all make sense soon enough, don't drop the novel because of it(as some have). The other "bad" thing about this novel, and the reason why it's score dropped a bit for me is it's inconsistent updates, and rather slow updates.. which is really understandable as he's writing the story, and not translating it I believe, and it's much more work than just reading something and writing it down in a different language. Even so, the author's not to blame, it's just that this novel is so good that it leaves me wanting for more, checking daily until finally a new chapter is out, and so I'm trying to get some recognition for the novel by writing this review. Try it out(you may skip the information bombs about the game workings, you'll not enjoy it any less if you find those troublesome, endure it)
Rise of The Undead Legion
Biako
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Mm, I personally just think it was slightly too "cluster****ed" in the first very few chapters, it's nice for things to be explained but sometimes it could be better executed. Still, it's a thing of the past. We still get our explanations, it just takes half as long to read and understand them. I love this novel, it's one of my favs still.
Galaktos:I agree that it's great novel, but i don't dislike the information bombs, feels way better to know why certain characters a OP.
Well, I'm considering taking down my review as I had to drop this novel because of how much worse it got. Also, from what I've seen of his character, that's not too surprising(although I can't just take your words at face value)
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I'm trying to make a living here bro, your review is one of the few ones that actually pushed me to continue writing and move on further. I don't know if you had reached the last parts of the story, because most readers there are enjoying it to a blast. I hope to still see you with the legion, it would bea shame to lose such a great undead such as you man
I've not reached the latest parts and to be honest, I may have been too hasty in my decision to stop reading. I stopped reading a bit after his undead legion shard was stolen, because I felt that it was going downhill. Things felt forced and it seemed to me like you tried to appeal much more to the simpleminded audience rather than the ones who enjoyed your story because of it's quality and depth.
Biako:I'm trying to make a living here bro, your review is one of the few ones that actually pushed me to continue writing and move on further. I don't know if you had reached the last parts of the story, because most readers there are enjoying it to a blast. I hope to still see you with the legion, it would bea shame to lose such a great undead such as you man
I also felt like I could no longer keep up with the updates, and so my presence in the legion wasn't noticeable. Anyway, I'll likely pick it up again in a little while, and if I really did make a blunder then I'll apologise. This novel still has a very important place in my heart as it's one of the few that I've followed along with during it's creation(not to mention how much I enjoyed it). Long unlive the Legion, even if I'm currently not part of it.
Mmoogl:I've not reached the latest parts and to be honest, I may have been too hasty in my decision to stop reading. I stopped reading a bit after his undead legion shard was stolen, because I felt that it was going downhill. Things felt forced and it seemed to me like you tried to appeal much more to the simpleminded audience rather than the ones who enjoyed your story because of it's quality and depth.
(Feel free to remove these comments once you're done reading, no point in having them here for others to read.)
Mmoogl:I also felt like I could no longer keep up with the updates, and so my presence in the legion wasn't noticeable. Anyway, I'll likely pick it up again in a little while, and if I really did make a blunder then I'll apologise. This novel still has a very important place in my heart as it's one of the few that I've followed along with during it's creation(not to mention how much I enjoyed it). Long unlive the Legion, even if I'm currently not part of it.
If you dont like writing I wont want to force you bro, but if you love doing this story write it, no matter how many people dislike like it, it is you passion, how you make a living, and it's just what you do. It's a also just a great story overall and I enjoy it alot like most of the other people that read it, so I encourage and want to push you to never give up on what you love doing or what you do for gun or money No matter how good or bad this novel gets I will never give it up! Never Hunger! Never Tire! Never Fear!
Biako:I'm trying to make a living here bro, your review is one of the few ones that actually pushed me to continue writing and move on further. I don't know if you had reached the last parts of the story, because most readers there are enjoying it to a blast. I hope to still see you with the legion, it would bea shame to lose such a great undead such as you man
To be honest that was a setting to introduce the Undrath god. Currently the most favorit character of most of the readers. I guarantee that you will end up rooting for the littel god after reading one or two interractions with him.
Mmoogl:I've not reached the latest parts and to be honest, I may have been too hasty in my decision to stop reading. I stopped reading a bit after his undead legion shard was stolen, because I felt that it was going downhill. Things felt forced and it seemed to me like you tried to appeal much more to the simpleminded audience rather than the ones who enjoyed your story because of it's quality and depth.
Mm, I already got a clue of his character back then, and I didn't mind him that much. The reason I stopped reading was because I felt like you'd joined the ranks of the average Webnovel authors. I felt like you were simplifying your work in order to appeal to the larger audience. The greatest books are the ones that require one to think. Anyway, I could be wrong. I'm just about done reading my current novel so I'll pick up the undead legion again in a few days.
Biako:To be honest that was a setting to introduce the Undrath god. Currently the most favorit character of most of the readers. I guarantee that you will end up rooting for the littel god after reading one or two interractions with him.
Great i hope you enjoy it. And think more that this course of action is relates to the book title. The last thing i ever want is to be another chinese author. Pumping words for money instead of telling an enjoyable story
Mmoogl:Mm, I already got a clue of his character back then, and I didn't mind him that much. The reason I stopped reading was because I felt like you'd joined the ranks of the average Webnovel authors. I felt like you were simplifying your work in order to appeal to the larger audience. The greatest books are the ones that require one to think. Anyway, I could be wrong. I'm just about done reading my current novel so I'll pick up the undead legion again in a few days.
Haha yeah, that's just the kind of feeling I started having with the shard being stolen, the spa and the party/dinner where they met the assassin and... Katherine? Pretty sure that's her name. Well, I'm glad to hear it.
Biako:Great i hope you enjoy it. And think more that this course of action is relates to the book title. The last thing i ever want is to be another chinese author. Pumping words for money instead of telling an enjoyable story
Unfortunately this pathetic author can't handle the criticism well. I made a polite critique of how bad this novel is, but the author erased it. SO DON'T READ THIS SH..I...T, IT'S COMPLETE TRASH!!! DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME!!! TO THE AUTHOR, I WILL WRITE EVERY TIME WHICH IS DELETED, YOU ARE AN AUTHOR AND PERSON TRASH!!! (Apparently you don't have time to edit your chapters, but to delete reviews, your time is left ... Lmao)