Mmoogl
I'm not a huge fan of novels going premium 100 chapters in but I get where they're coming from.
of reading
122
Read books
Badges
9Moments
36
Mmoogl1yrPostedI wrote like 6 chapters to start off this novel but then I began experiencing a bunch of health-related issues(most notable of which are heavy fatigue and pain/issues in my left arm) making it near impossible to continue writing. I still don't want to drop the ideas I've had for writing, however, so I've made the decision to "clean" this "book"(NOT A BOOK), and just leave it like that(hopefully I can contact webnovel and get it removed in the future). Once I've gotten some medicine for whatever's going on, and I've sorted out my life a bit, I hope to make another attempt at writing. This'll likely be under the same title, "Solace of Rain", though I expect to approach it from a different angle, resulting in a vastly different story.
- Mmoogl2yrCommented
So he has 3 personalities?
"I agree, we should get rid of her." - Mmoogl2yrCommented
O's may be Originals?
Quinn couldn't help but wonder what would happen if he drank the O type. - Mmoogl2yrCommented
Given how much the authors emphasizing the uncertainty of what happens, it won't mean death.
In fact, Quinn didn't know if going to 0 HP equaled death, but after what had happened today, he didn't want to take any chances. - Mmoogl2yrCommented
Michael Myers, that you?
Rylee was still lost in his daydream when out of nowhere something hit him from the side. He felt the impact on his face and staggered to the floor, holding his chin. - Mmoogl2yrCommented
This MC needs to be beaten more. He's still much too impulsive, and dumb.
Unable to hold his anger in any longer he threw out a punch. Alas, Mono appeared to have been able to predict his action. Before Quinn had even begun his attack, the older student had taken a step back, making Quinn's fist hit nothing but air. - Mmoogl2yrCommented
Difficulty.
'So, Penelope was only fine quality… If someone asked me to rate her, I'd give her an 8.5, but it seems the system's standards are higher than mine… I'm curious how it appraises girls, but I doubt I'll learn that any time soon. The tier evaluation should be a hidden function…' - Mmoogl2yrCommented
What would happen if the MC prayed to Yudai
"Ah, ah! Dear Yudai...!" - Mmoogl2yrCommented
Heyo, he resurrected him once, who's to say he can't do it again?
"Don't worry, big brother." I walked over to him and then pointed the muzzle at his head. "This bullet contains healing magic, so you probably won't die. However, since you're getting hit from a close range, it might hurt just a tiny bit." - Mmoogl2yrCommented
Foreshadowing? Self-revival?
"Listen well. We are nothing but mere puppets. We must carry out any and all commands of the Imperial Family, regardless of what they are. If we are commanded to kill the empire's subjects, then we must not differentiate between men, women, children, and the elderly and execute everyone we see. Even if that command extends to our masters, we must follow through their will. Their commands are absolute. You must not harbour a hint of hesitation, a trace of suspicion, or even as much as a question in your heart. Do you understand?" - Mmoogl2yrCommented
I feel like they might not be entirely human. Who knows, though.
It seemed that even the Crimson Cross and Verdant Cross folks were enjoying the festival as well. But uh, weren't they going to take off their bird beak masks and balaclavas? How were they going to even eat and drink like that? - Mmoogl2yrCommented
They're really the same those two, it's a great dynamic.
Luan spoke up next, "Don't you wish we could learn just how much more Allen Olfolse's been hiding from us, your majesty?" - Mmoogl2yrCommented
"yet"
Alice flinched and took a look at her own hand, wondering if she had dropped her wine glass. Thankfully, it seemed that she wasn't drunk enough yet to make such a mistake. - Mmoogl2yrCommented
Sheesh. He's a complete 50/50, this one.
Traits: benevolent personality, vicious personality, rotting body, excellent talent in swordsmanship, qualities of a wise ruler, thunderbolts, qualities of a tyrant. - Mmoogl2yrCommented
The whole exchange seemingly consisted of a few sentences, a few seconds of pause time, and her moving about for a bit. The entire night.
I yawned grandly and rubbed my drowsy eyes, only to realise that she was no longer in the library. I suddenly felt apologetic just then, thinking that I may have needlessly held her up here for the whole night when she probably wanted to go back to her room and rest instead. - Mmoogl2yrCommented
Harem member, I assume. Gotta keep up with an op MC.
Traits: Loving and merciful, a massive pool of divinity plus magical knowledge, god's fragment, prediction, hand to hand combat, excellent physique. - Mmoogl2yrCommented
Interesting. How long has she been a lady-in-waiting for? A few months? Perhaps just about as long as he was exiled for.
"Huh, ladies-in-waiting gotta work hard too, don't they? Seeing how you need to study refinement even deep into the night like this." - Mmoogl2yrCommented
Why don't they just force everyone in the court to drink high quality holy water, it's good for their health- right?
Most importantly, though, I was in the palace of the Imperial Family, a place which was completely filled from top to bottom with Priests and Paladins. No vampire would be insane enough to infiltrate this sort of sanctuary, right? - Mmoogl2yrCommented
I'm using this for my campaign.
The four meter-tall giants, zombie ogres, continued moving. They scooped up the zombies swarming around them, and as if to create an onigiri, began shaping their fellow undead into a ball. Noises of bones and flesh being crushed from the ogre's strength resounded out loudly. In some cases, zombies exploded while rotting blood dripped out too.