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Bishop_
Bishop_Lv106yr
2018-07-13 04:55

This story is good and the grammatical mistakes aren't so big or often enough to get annoying but the numbers the author tend to use seem very exaggerated. The MC also leveled up relatively slowly at first but in like 6 chapters is suddenly top of first realm so that accelerated pretty quickly. But that's about all keep up with the good work author. 👍👍👍

The Upgrade/ Sect/ Anime System

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PervyHermit
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IN A NUT: MC, who was abandoned at birth and later killed by his own parents, gets reborn as a PRINCE who has nothing but a small home. a caring wife AND A SYSTEM!!!, which helps him upgrade almost anything about him! Apart from the SIDE QUEST: FIND ALL THE GRAMMAR & SPELLING MISTAKES that pops up in your mind, when you read each & every line, you cannot find any fault with this work...

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La6
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I feel sad cause I 5 stared my own work Any ways, I just started to write this story as a hobby. I will try to write 1 chapter a day with everything I got. This story will have the worst writing ever, cause I’m not good at writing.

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UndeadSage
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I donno why this work is so low in the charts although it is good work(wont say the best but still good and deserves better)... until you get a good ranking SPIRIT stones from all of my accounts will go to you... PERSONAL SUGGESTION: The site lacks "committed-to-a-single-woman" type of novels and yours have the potential to fit in very well!!! the work should go A LITTLE "above 18" rather than "for general audiences"(a pinch of romance for taste and didn't mean a smut)... GooD LucK!!

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LordGengar
LordGengarLv3

This had potential.. BUT its all pretty much run out now!!! used to be one of my favs but slow updates n plain story made me change my mind!! pros: no cliches cons: If ATLEAST cliches were present it wouldnt've been so boring I know the author is kid and you write at the free time, but just wanted to give an honest review!! you are just 14 and already writing novels that require parental guidance?!! HAHA... AWESOME if guys like us have a club , you are welcome!!

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WaterArmySect
WaterArmySectLv2

Can u change it from 1st perspective to 3rd? I add in the library for now.. Hope it will changed later.. If not.. Then too bad.. I just dont get used for story with 1st perspective..

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Tsayad
TsayadLv5

Not even half way through chapter 1 and get sweating. "Sh**" " F***ing"... A14 y/o writing should be supported and encouraged to express creativity. Oh well. This may have an interesting story. I'll never know.

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Willy_Hartanto
Willy_HartantoLv4

Nice plotline but storyline not smooth enough. As a reader story feel like skip a little while reading. Too many time skip ruin the story, MC just suddenly get strong. And Im not feel excited even MC score highest in entrance.

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Ricegod38
Ricegod38Lv10

I'm too lazy to Weber review almost stories but I actually took the time out my day to write this review I read it it too cuz it is good amazing good great also better cool heavenly Godly

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Everton
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there are many beginners who make a very good novel however they give up. I hope you do not give up on this novel because it's very good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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