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La6
La6Lv36yr
2018-06-23 23:15

I feel sad cause I 5 stared my own work Any ways, I just started to write this story as a hobby. I will try to write 1 chapter a day with everything I got. This story will have the worst writing ever, cause I’m not good at writing.

The Upgrade/ Sect/ Anime System

L1_a
3.8
54 Chs

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TrSDTKW
TrSDTKWLv15

Look what I just read completely contradicts what I read you have above average writing and I like this even with just the first chapter believe in yourself man

6yr
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Redando
RedandoLv5

Im sure you will doing good. From what i saw you write really good. I hope this will be another great novel on this site :) Good Luck!!

6yr
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Deedlit
DeedlitLv3

Keep going it’s very good till now, don’t be afraid if need stop a few days for more ideas, better w8 of getting quality drop ❤️

6yr
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ETERNIDADE
ETERNIDADELv5

Eu vou ler,sou brasileiro,bom trabalho autor,tomara que seja uma boa história...

6yr
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Burberries
BurberriesLv6

Man just keep going it is verry good and i don't care if its your first book, Just goodluck and may the force be with you XD.

6yr
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miika95
miika95Lv14

the story is good, just the writing is flawed. if you want, then i could give you an email and will correct a few things from chapters. (already out chapters because i sometimes have very little time and i can just help you boost the quality a little.)

6yr
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L1_a
L1_aAuthor

sure if you want to do it

miika95:the story is good, just the writing is flawed. if you want, then i could give you an email and will correct a few things from chapters. (already out chapters because i sometimes have very little time and i can just help you boost the quality a little.)
6yr
miika95
miika95Lv14

mterel344@gmail.com you can send old chapter files or something and i will go over them.

L1_a:sure if you want to do it
6yr
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L1_a
L1_aAuthor

okay ill send them to you

miika95:mterel344@gmail.com you can send old chapter files or something and i will go over them.
6yr
L1_a
L1_aAuthor

I sent you Chapter 1-22

miika95:mterel344@gmail.com you can send old chapter files or something and i will go over them.
6yr
IDS
IDSLv5

Keep it up👍

6yr
LazyReader0
LazyReader0Lv6

Its totally a turn off for me if you are just 14. Whispers 'hide it, remove it'.

6yr
Other Reviews
PervyHermit
PervyHermitLv4

IN A NUT: MC, who was abandoned at birth and later killed by his own parents, gets reborn as a PRINCE who has nothing but a small home. a caring wife AND A SYSTEM!!!, which helps him upgrade almost anything about him! Apart from the SIDE QUEST: FIND ALL THE GRAMMAR & SPELLING MISTAKES that pops up in your mind, when you read each & every line, you cannot find any fault with this work...

6yr

UndeadSage
UndeadSageLv5

I donno why this work is so low in the charts although it is good work(wont say the best but still good and deserves better)... until you get a good ranking SPIRIT stones from all of my accounts will go to you... PERSONAL SUGGESTION: The site lacks "committed-to-a-single-woman" type of novels and yours have the potential to fit in very well!!! the work should go A LITTLE "above 18" rather than "for general audiences"(a pinch of romance for taste and didn't mean a smut)... GooD LucK!!

6yr
LordGengar
LordGengarLv3

This had potential.. BUT its all pretty much run out now!!! used to be one of my favs but slow updates n plain story made me change my mind!! pros: no cliches cons: If ATLEAST cliches were present it wouldnt've been so boring I know the author is kid and you write at the free time, but just wanted to give an honest review!! you are just 14 and already writing novels that require parental guidance?!! HAHA... AWESOME if guys like us have a club , you are welcome!!

6yr
WaterArmySect
WaterArmySectLv2

Can u change it from 1st perspective to 3rd? I add in the library for now.. Hope it will changed later.. If not.. Then too bad.. I just dont get used for story with 1st perspective..

6yr
Tsayad
TsayadLv5

Not even half way through chapter 1 and get sweating. "Sh**" " F***ing"... A14 y/o writing should be supported and encouraged to express creativity. Oh well. This may have an interesting story. I'll never know.

6yr
Willy_Hartanto
Willy_HartantoLv4

Nice plotline but storyline not smooth enough. As a reader story feel like skip a little while reading. Too many time skip ruin the story, MC just suddenly get strong. And Im not feel excited even MC score highest in entrance.

6yr
Ricegod38
Ricegod38Lv10

I'm too lazy to Weber review almost stories but I actually took the time out my day to write this review I read it it too cuz it is good amazing good great also better cool heavenly Godly

6yr
Everton
EvertonLv4

there are many beginners who make a very good novel however they give up. I hope you do not give up on this novel because it's very good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

6yr
TyoQ
TyoQLv5

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