Good work, keep it up! Don't be disappointed by negative comments, or pace of novel , you're doing a fine job. There are many sham systems out here, which in the end were old men hidden under disguise of system, and helping the MC time to time, bro don't do that, that's ****, pure ****... As any logical, rational person will doubt such system(there's a novel in which MC on further increasing power dissolves the system as he doubts its reason) creating a flaw most novels, you've corrected it here... That's cool... Keep em releasin
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